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Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2020 6:17 AM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

how are you man? any plans on maybe youd write something like this again? I am honestly crossing my fingers youll do again !!

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Date: September 14 2020 10:35 PM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

pure and pure evil hot and amazing. please more like this!



Author's Response:

Seems like people like the cruelty, I'll keep that in mind.

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Date: September 05 2020 3:27 PM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

NO it was perfect like that, that was totally what I loved the most in this story, how her actions mare it hell worse without knowing it. THAT was the entire thing driving me horny! I liked your other stories already but not to 100% to my likings, this was way more to what I love! A mix of unaware dark humor but also cruel irony and then detailed stuff lile here, with how she peeded and you decribed how it came out of her vagina and the droplets and all... wonderful! I even would love a plot like this again with the micro speck ging through a girl peeing shitting and him be the size of a dirt particle, glued to one of her tiny hairs next to her anus, but shes shaved. I like a shaved butt and vagina more. Please write a plot again like this story, was awesome!



Author's Response:

Okay I understand what you mean, thanks for explaining what you like! There will be more unaware cruel micro misfortunes in the future!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2020 3:16 AM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

Absolutely fantastic chapter. I would had loved it even more if maybe he had sent up again by the splash back of her turd and now he was glued to the side of her anus closing. I just love cruel dark unaware ass plots more than anything if combined with dark irony like here. Would love to see more to come in the future, especially something going horrible wrong is so hot, and how there are kinda "oops" moments and such.



Author's Response:

As a plot device in these types of stories I feel like splash back is used quite often. Is it bad? No, but I wanted to try something else with this story. Glad you liked it anyways, I had a lot of fun with writing the scenarios. Nikki's insignificant actions being much more harmful to Mark than she realized was the sort of "cruel twist" I was going for.

Reviewer: teradonk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 5:49 PM Title: Ending B: Found in a Toilet Bowl?

Amazing chapter. hell yes!



Author's Response:

Thank you as always! ^_^

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