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Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2007 6:49 AM Title: working together

Great job.  You got it right and the story line works.

Author's Response: thanks! i am trying to keep this story in the relm of believeability in terms of the criminals. i'm glad you like the story. it was a lot of fun to write. i have part of the next chapter written. hopefully i will finish it quickly. i'm just trying to decide exactly how the plot will turn out. thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment.

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