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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2007 8:40 PM Title: M

Fast-paced and humorous. A rare combination, indeed. :-D

Bravo!

Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2007 3:29 AM Title: M

I can probably guess what happens next, if it is up to me...

An airstrike of F-35 fighters goes underway and several missiles impact on her ,killing her and tearing her body to shreds. Either that or some Tomahawks....

Or we go for the simple option of a 10 megaton warhead that is made by a lot of uranium...

Points of criticism:

Paragraph your stories, so it isn't a huge block of text. It's annoying how pressing enter creates 2 lines of space, I know

There'd be more than just soldiers sent at such a target. Perhaps a few Apache gunships and a few M1A2 Abrams tanks...

Points of praise:

.... good plot I think...

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