[Report This]Date: May 27 2018 3:00 PM Title: BONUS Chapter 12 - A New Experiment
I love this story!
I like how Samantha still clearly has love in her hearth and protects both Bree and her exchange host parents, while simultaneously requiring an unholy amount of flattened nanos to function. I think this "injustice" is very hot.
Also props for finally having a story with a Samantha who stands up for herself, to compensate for the Kaiju Slayer samantha.
As for the cliffhanger, I wonder what will happen next.
Will Bree grow? Will they wreak havoc on some nano city?
Will huge Bree visit her hometown?
Anyway, thanks for writing!
Date: May 26 2018 1:43 PM Title: BONUS Chapter 12 - A New Experiment
Trust me I like this story, I wouldn't bother commenting if I didn't. I don't even think it really NEEDS to make sense (despite my nitpicking), it doesn't, keeps things light hearted when murder gts stories don't take themselves too seriously. But if your goal is to make things make sense and have internal consistency then yeah my nitpicking will help you there, lol. Anyway, I'll be staying tuned.
Date: May 26 2018 9:29 AM Title: BONUS Chapter 12 - A New Experiment
Gee aint that convinient? And WHO gets to use the serum? A diplomat for the rights of nano people? A paragon of peace? Pssshhh, nope! Another person with a taste for nano death, thats who!
Author's Response:
NO
(because if it made sense like that the story would be boring)
Let's just say it's one of those privately owned places like at a college that just uses volunteers, and they were the first .
Still working hard to make thinks make sense within the world for bugs like you.
(Besides, I already said in a different story that the government doesn't really care about taking care of the nanos, so leaving it to a private institution would make some sense)