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Reviewer: Dipperhound Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2018 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Picking on the Bullies

Hey the story's pretty amazing compared to other stories on this sight. I actually sent you a contact email thingy in hopes I could ask you some questions if you're down for it. Im fascinated by your work and would like to learn more. Thanks :)

(Btw im 15 so hopefully that's not weird)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Picking on the Bullies

Hopefully you will have many more chapters Goddess Lucy.  I am kinda in agreement with Samantha, Bree needs to be more sadistic in her domineering.  She could have ordered Adrian and Betty to each suck one of her feet entirely into their mouths (that is one foot in each one's mouth) and even had Samantha add a bit of muscle to stuff them in.  Shoes made from bullies, he he he.  Heck, with her girlfriend Samantha's backing she could have made them both kneel down and pray out loud to her as their Goddess while all the students in the cafeteria watched on in disdain.

It is nice that Samantha swallowed Adrian, and the tilting of her head back for effect is pretty sexy.

One has to wonder if Betty, alone after her boyfriend being swallowed alive, is going to completely breakdown before Samantha and Bree.  Will they have pity or vengence upon Betty?

What is going to happen to all the students from the small plastic cylinder?  Will they end up as lunch, entertainment, or both?

Perhaps Samantha can suggest to Bree that she should pick out a student or two to enslave for her own personal abuse.  Bree wouldn't necessarily have to whip him/her/them so much as decree various punishments (e.g. one could serve as a saddle on Samantha's shoulder for Bree to sit upon, they could be forced into becoming Bree's fulltime home servants, locked in a pillory and beaten, other's could even sentenced to death by Bree's method of choice)

Thanks for yet another great chapter Goddess Lucy.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Picking on the Bullies

Pretty good. Typical gts carnage and murder, I agree with Bree, Sam could be abit more creative with her torture methods. Maybe bring an element of psychological torture in addition to physical? I don't know. It was well written. I hope you introduce other "named" characters that aren't killed immediately into this, I think it'll help spice the story up abit.

Author's Response:

Thanks Geeman! Think you got the names switched right there though ;)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! It is pretty typical stuff I think, but I hope I'm doing it in a more interesting and sexy way than others, I just want to give stuff I think is quality <3

And another character or two would be neat, but I think this story only has a few more chapters left in it, at least that's the plan so far. Besides, they're all nano there, Bree's lucky as hell she even got spared~. But I'll try to hang on to that suggestion d3;

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