Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 5.5 - The New Power Couple

A really nice set up chapter.  I can almost see the Spalding tatoo on the next chapter to come {volleyball reference}.

The way Samantha traps her tinies is always so exciting, such as the way she is holding the train with her fingers wrapped around it to prevent anyone from escaping.  Samantha literally holds their fates in her hands; what a display of absolute power.

I love how you always throw in a tiny getting squashed or swallowed so nonchalantly by Samantha.  It's like an ongoing joke that spices up every chapter.

It was a big sigh of relief that Samantha repreived Bree, and even better that they are hitting it off and share interests.  That adds a human side of Samantha that makes her tiny classmates seem farther removed from her world; the difference between people like her, humans, and her schoolmates, bugs.

If I may humbly beg a favor of you Goddess-Lucy, I posted my first story "Rachelle's Sweat Pads" I would be greatly honored if you were to read it.  You do not have to, that goes without saying; but I am begging you to please, please, please take some of your precious time to read my story.  I would not be offended in the least if you said "NO!" and left it at that Goddess-Lucy.

Thank you calling me "pathetic little insect" in your last reply.  Hopefully you feel such is the right circumstance to use "insect" appropriately when refering to me Goddess-Lucy.  Thank you!