Date: April 07 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Warming Up
DAMN!!! What a fantastic story. I have to be quite honest, I don't know what's hotter, your incredible story or you calling us bugs and tinies in your intros. I think it's the later.
Your writing style is very nice. Aside from a few grammatical errors, repeated words, and the paragraph spacing that throw off the easy reading flow of your story, your writing is quite good.
My favorite line, Chapter 3: "it only got worse for them as she pulled her gigantic panties out of a wedgie and covered them with it, sealing them in for good." SO HOT! True I'd rather be IN the wedgie, being stuck in the back of her panties is a close second. By the way, did she take these panties off for gym class?
All I can say is please keep this story going. Or as Samantha's Bree would say "I HAVE A GIANT FETISH AND YOU ARE THE ABSOLUTE BEST I'VE EVER READ!!! P-PLEASE KEEP WRITING GODDESS_LUCY_tinyCrusher!!!"
Awww, thanks so much little bug~. I honestly love how detailed your comment is, and I'll try to work on those things you mentioned ;)
I'm glad you're loving the story, and lucky for you I was just posting the next chapter. I hope you keep reading, and keep up that lovely praise you're giving me~.
Hope to hear from you again. Thanks! <3