Date: April 07 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm rooting for his mother in law, but regardless this story is very very promising.
Not like you didn't know already given all the comments, but still..
Author's Response:
Well I wouldn't count her out by any means as she is a main character in this story so just hang in there Rooto and I'm sure she's bound to make another appearance soon. ;)
Thanks a lot for the comments as I truly appreciate them. :)
[Report This]Date: April 07 2018 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
First his sister in law and now his doctor? I'm starting to think losing your height is ALMOST like winning the jackpot with girls....that still see you as a person of course.
Author's Response:
He, he, he... Yeah I guess in that respect that puts a good light on his predicament.. I suppose there's a positive way of looking at everything.. I'm glad that you've found it too ColdAtlast! :)
Date: April 07 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love how it starts out with them complaining about being grabbed at will and then Dr. McPherson just reaches in and grabs Shiela. Later she comes back for the shoe. Love how she plays with it between her thumb and forefinger.
Dr. McPherson is a sexual lady who can bring pleasure or pain to get what she wants.
Loved her comment saying I'll be back to collect you. Then when she returns she just lays her hand out flat. She doesn't ask him to climb on, she expects the little man to obey her.
She is a sexual lady. She can give pleasure or pain to get what she wants. Will there be another lady who will give him a needle or a rectale thermometer at some point or both?
Love that his wife has a carrying case for him. Simple, logical and demeaning all at the same time.
Author's Response:
Well we haven't gotten to the medical exams yet Diesel but we will get there rest assure. ;)
And yes, a caryin case would be all of those things which I plan on exploring in a future chapter as well.
The thing about the shoe just seemed like something that might naturally happen as demeaning as it would from John's point of view as sometimes people do and say things without thinking of the immediate ramifications of those actions.
Thanks a lot for noticing the little gems that I sprinkled throughout this chapter Diesel! :)
Date: April 07 2018 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
That's some powerful theropy. I wonder how his interactions with his family will be when he reaches on inch.
Author's Response:
Probably not... Well he'll have to cross that bridge when he gets there, he he.
Powerful therapy indeed though I agree. ;)
Thank you very much for the comments Kane. :)
Date: April 01 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice, news?
Author's Response:
What news? You mean update?
Date: March 31 2018 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
I certainly don't expect you to put out a chapter every day. Steven King doesn't go at that pace. I was just trying to infer that I enjoy your writing.
I also don't read stories for the sexual parts of the story. I prefer the stories that are about being small and the way people treat you when you are smaller. They treat you as you are less important and often humiliate you and treat you as if you don't matter.
Loving it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yeah I know that you weren't expecting that Diesel.. I was just putting that out there for everyone but didnt' really know how to articulate that so left it open ended. So not to worry. ;)
I'm very glad that everything doesn't have to be a orgasm fest for you as I suspect it does have to be for some others too!!
Thank you Diesel as always. :)
Date: March 31 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
the chapter was fun, maybe he could have ask to the mother of two girls for help or a ride to sheila house.
Author's Response:
Yeah but then they'd want to let him in for his own safety and his plan would probably go astray once again. At least that what I had him figuring. ;)
Date: March 30 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can hardly wait until he is in the lab. Having him get needles and maybe a thermometer or something else in his behind would be cool and humiliating. Love Nurse's taking charge or having their own sadistic fun. For as you say, his own good. Nothing like an anal probe in the morning when you are 4 inches tall.
Author's Response:
Oh the lab scene will rear it's ugly head rest assured Diesel.. So please have patience with that one, he he he.
And I think the size that I had him pegged at for that particular scene was 3.25 inches. :)
Date: March 30 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think the Mother would have beat the girls to him either. But she didn't have too. If the girls were not there, I think the Mother would have grabbed him herself. Her footsteps would have covered too much ground compared to his tiny legs.
I am greatly enjoying your adaptation of the ISM. I look everyday for it. You have such a grasp on characters and how to make things so lifelike. It makes me feel like I am there.
Author's Response:
True. Very true.
Making you feel like you're there is my primary goal... That's why details are so important.. As are emotions and mental thoughts of the characters involved..
I spent a lot of time on this chapter and took my time with it as well.. I don't want to risk over exposure here so ask that you please forgive me if chapters are not submitted every night. I do have another chapter ready to go though which will explore another aspect of the psychological side of things..
I also didn't want the story to bog down into a sex fest every single chapter either as this would make it very one dimensional.. So hopefully people can bear with it when he's not having his organ drained, he he he.
Thanks again Diesel! :)
Date: March 30 2018 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love where it is going. I like how he got to interact with the enviorment ouside the house. Thanks for another addition!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you liked the scenery.. I seldom if ever hear about it and now it might interact with the main shrunken protaganist..
Thanks a lot for appreciating that and voicing it too Logan!!! :)
Date: March 30 2018 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
An exciting chapter. I understand his trying to get away but there are so many people and animals to hide from. So many mini adventures and dangers.
Having the Mother eventually spot him sealed his doom. He never could have escaped from her. Having her lackies run and capture him was easy. She need only raise her voice to get him in her hands. Loved the girls wanting to keep him. They will always wish they could have kept him. I was wondering if Mrs. Pedraison would be home? I wonder how she might have disciplined him once the Mother handed him over and mentioned where he was. Cool chapter.
Author's Response:
I decided to end the chapter and not go into that scenario with the Mother in Law (but the thought of her catching him and those reprecussions did definately float through my mind) because I had busted over 4000 words for that chapter and didn't want to risk straining people's attention spans anymore than I probably already had done... Usually I stop at around 2500 words per chapter so this one was really long.
I think she couldn't have beat the girls to him even if she tried though.. That being the girls main driving ambition at that moment.
But she did the next best thing and allowed her daughters to do the leg work for her literally.
Thanks again for your thoughtful and indepth analysis of this story Diesel. It's wonderful to know that some people are definately paying attention which makes me extra cautious now, ha ha ha.!
[Report This]Date: March 30 2018 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
"he belongs to someone and we’ve got to return him" He's not even considered a person now to the people around him. At 12 inches that would make him Hot Toys size or the size of a Barbie Doll. Now more than ever I'm curious to see what you have planned as he gets smaller.
Author's Response:
I was wondering if anyone was going to catch that.. Glad to see that it definately did not escape your attention Kane..
I figured that some people would just callously assume that he was owned or possessed by a legal gaurdian of some sort.. Humiliating as that would be.
Thanks a lot for the comments and the good eye Kane. :)
Date: March 28 2018 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok grazie, comunque sono italiano .... Ah ah ah
Author's Response:
Sure, whatever.
Date: March 28 2018 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Semplicemente intrigante... La suocera è sicuramente il personaggio più interessante, una perfetta dominatrice ... Credo che il futuro sarà complicato per il piccolo personaggio sempre più piccolo ed in balia di giganti forse anche la moglie lo tradirà ... Chissà .. BUON lavoro, spero di poter leggere novità a breve ... i
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you liked the mother.. There will be more with her of course.. And not to worry as there will be another chapter soon. ;)
Thanks for the comments too.. Please try to realize that most people here do not speak Spanish, so if you could review in English then others will know what you are talking about.
Thanks again. :)
Date: March 27 2018 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
John's family members like mother and father? His friends might come in to play later on though.. That's a good point.
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Yeah like John's parents, siblings ... of course we are on Giantess World so I think mostly we readers want to see females family members but Jessica's dad may be a nice addition to the story to put more humiliation on John even if personally i prefer gentle stuff.
Author's Response:
Well, for starters I was going to figure a way to factor in Jessica's white trash mother. So that would be the first step in that direction. Old work collegues too. ;)
Date: March 27 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Cool stuff. Riding the girls is like riding a horse. They are both big a dangerous. It was a way of trying to keep him as a part of the family.
I can see how amazing it would be to be with Karen. She sounds wonderful. What an experience. Using her breasts to ejaculate must have felt amazing. If Sarah ever found out he would be dead or wish he was.
Loved Karen using her stern voice to end the pony rides. The girls are gigantic to little johnny but she still lords over all of them. A natural respect that john no longer enjoys.
Author's Response:
Which is exactly how I would see a situation like that playing out. A big concernted mother hen putting her foot down eventually. Ha, ha.
And yes, both girls are very much dangerous to somebody John's size at that moment.. I'm glad that you noticed and pointed that out.
Thanks again for the great comments Diesel. :)
Date: March 27 2018 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Karen is interesting character half gentle half evil. Horse riding scene is amazing. Jessica getting some influences over Laura. I hope we see John's Family members & friends.
Author's Response:
John's family members like mother and father? His friends might come in to play later on though.. That's a good point.
I'm glad you liked the horse riding scene. I figure that the girls are still very much into playing which if normal life is anything to go by then yes they are. Ha, ha. I read a lot of stories where they are focused on other things and well... Ok, but they are still going to act their age I imagine.
Thanks for the comments Smoki. :)
[Report This]Date: March 26 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Liking the direction so far! The random order of the events helps the pace as well. Karen might be my favorite so far. Sounds like that small fling might not the last I bet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for briging up the random order issue ColdAlas.. Because this is the core of the engine of this story.
I wanted to get away from the very slow methodical grind that most of these shrinking stories must give service to.
I wanted to have the freedom to get an inspiration and present it to you all that very night and not have to leave it in the notes for weeks on end and risk it becoming stale or impractical by the time that I got to it as has happened to some of my other story ideas due to the chains of chronological rules.
The problem with this is remembering what came when and is the trade-off that I've already noticed.. But that's my cross to bare on this particular writing style attempt..
I'm liking it a lot though as it allows me to nail things right out of the starting gate which is so liberating I am finding. A word of note to some of you other writers who might be readig these reviews. ;)
Thanks a lot for bringing the random order aspect to the forefront with your comments ColdAtlas. ;)
[Report This]Date: March 26 2018 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Live this story! Karen’s my favorite, cant wait to see how she handles him when he’s the size of doll.
Author's Response:
Neither can I Johnsmith!!! Ha, ha, neither can I. :)
Thanks a lot!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Damn, he got some in a big way, and I do mean a BIG way. Makes me wonder if she did as an act of kindness or for her own disires. Kids being rough with him is very realistic. I wonder how rough things will get as he gets smaller.
Author's Response:
I would imagine rougher, ha, ha! I figured that I'd let the motives of her sexual advances travel on the breeze but should have known that observant readers like you Kane would not overlook that and bring me to task on the issue.. He, he.
My big hint wasn when I said that she had not had any contact with another human for over 2 years.. But one can not rule out her inclination to bestow mercy either so perhaps she chasing both alternatives at the same time as I've known some smart ladies who could juggle multiple motives as one time.
If I were to vote, my ballot would be cast for both motives. :)
But that does not mean that she will not allow carnal desires to crush the good intentions eventually either. ;) I don't know if that will happen either.. I'd like to show off and say that I'm three steps ahead on her nature but sadly I am not.
I will think on it some more though Kane.. Thanks a lot for bringing that subtle point to the surface. :)