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Reviewer: emshoshoshenis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2022 1:55 PM Title: Thinking with Anna

great

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2018 12:11 PM Title: Thinking with Anna

Loving every addition. It'd be great to see more of her at under 1/16th of an inch, maybe thrust under her little sister's toenail? Also if she's truly a slave to those sneakers she should spend some time servicing or even becoming their filthy soles. 

Reviewer: Tinyman345 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2018 6:08 AM Title: Thinking with Anna

Love this story. I love how cruel the mom and sisters are towards the girl and how they enjoy torturing her. Hope you keep writing more, I'll definitely keep reading.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2018 1:54 PM Title: Thinking with Anna

Really good, if not slightly short addition. I love your writing, and this story in particular. I really do hope that you decide to write more of it, especially with more dirty shoe soles and the protagonist being forgotten about and left to suffer for ages. You also mentioned in the intro that she can be reduced to a size you need a magnifying glass to see - it'd be amazing to see that explored, like she's rolled into some toejam in he sisters school socks, or caught under a toe nail, or mired in gum or other filth under their sneakers. 

Out of interest do you do commissions? 

 

Looking forward to your next additions.



Author's Response:

You have good ideas. I could do commissions ;P You can contact me in private: luidgikiwi@hotmail.com and we can talk.

Reviewer: master369 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 12 2018 6:44 AM Title: Thinking with Anna

Great story!  The cruelness of the 2 sisters and stepmother is amazing.  :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 11:06 PM Title: Thinking with Anna

Great stuff

Reviewer: Tinyman345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 9:43 PM Title: Thinking with Anna

This a great story and you should definitely continue it! The characters are so cruel! I really liked the part where the mother had her daughter taped down and smelling her smelly feet after her run. I also liked the idea of her being trapped in the ped egg. You should definitely write more.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 11:20 AM Title: Thinking with Anna

Absolutely perfect. I'd love to read more. I especially like that she can be made even smaller  and the shoe / shoe sole action. 

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