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Reviewer: bombyx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2018 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 01: Introduction

I love this story and your writing overall. The raunchiness and cruelty of the scenarios you describe are really creative and original, so please keep it up! I also like how the characters behave like spoiled, bratty millennials. I think there's definitely a lot of people out there who enjoy material like this.

Reviewer: DoctorStrange42 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 01: Introduction

Loved it. Wish he actually did kiss the ass of the woman in the bathroom. 

Reviewer: Thornton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 01: Introduction

Here's a first review for you. Wonderful story, great characters. Yes, it's contrived here and there like Tyler screaming out that he'll kiss the ass of the woman in the bathrooms... but all in all, you're not scared of writing the fun stuff. 

Avery is probably my favourite character. Keep up the great work. 

#bootyislife

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