Date: March 17 2018 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End
I enjoyed this short! Naturally it left me wanting for more as your stories often tend to do!
I loved the scenes and how they were described— perfect! However it did feel like the main characters were 2-dimensional and supporting characters were pretty robotic and hollow.
I get the impression that you may have done so intentionally to keep things short and simple. A great read never-the-less!
Date: March 09 2018 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End
Disappointed with the end expected more interaction between Jack and Nancy, feels rushed
It was rushed. The story was longer than what the customer could afford, and I had to cut it short so it wouldn't get too expensive. This was a commission.