Reviews For A Sister's Love
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Reviewer: Godzilla 2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2021 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End

glad for this happy ending great story 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End

Damn now I'm kinda sad that it's over :'( lol I would have loved to see how Jack and Nancy's relationship and life developed over time. Great story tho!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2018 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End

I enjoyed this short! Naturally it left me wanting for more as your stories often tend to do!

I loved the scenes and how they were described— perfect! However it did feel like the main characters were 2-dimensional and supporting characters were pretty robotic and hollow.

I get the impression that you may have done so intentionally to keep things short and simple. A great read never-the-less!

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End

Disappointed with the end expected more interaction between Jack and Nancy, feels rushed



Author's Response:

It was rushed. The story was longer than what the customer could afford, and I had to cut it short so it wouldn't get too expensive. This was a commission.

Reviewer: WootJimbob Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Gruesome End

Amazing start to finish.

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