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Reviewer: Tinyscopic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 5:39 PM Title: Mark - Part Two

Oh man. After seeing the bigger races abuse the smaller races, its nice to see one of them turn the tables on their giant tormenter. I can see a couple of scenarios happening in the future. They could make good ideas if the author ever returns to this series.

1. After Julia gets used to being a Prodigan, she decides to use her size to protect the smaller races so no-one will ever go what she went through again.

2. What if when Julia was drenched in Mark's semen, she ended up getting pregnant? It could lead to an interesting story where Julia is conflicted over raising her kidnapper's child. Does she decide to give it up for adoption because it brings back memories of torment or does she raise it with love and kindness in spite of that?

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