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Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2019 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 54

Just a quick addition to my last comment: Shannon is walking around full of chemicals and something is bound to happen. Maybe she will accidentally shrink down herself while having Chris on her body (or protagonist will end up in micro-verse allright XDD) or someone will end up growing… just some ideas. Oh I can’t wait to see!

 



Author's Response: Oh, something is definitely bound to happen, and I’m excited for you to see!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2019 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 54

I find Shannon to be a most intriguing character. She is clearly evil, manipulative, a maniac even. But she also has moments where she genuinely seems to care for Chris and truly want and fantasize with him loving her. This chapter is one of these chapters that highlight her obsession, and it got me curious about what would be her reaction if Chris actually kicked the bucket or got really hurt or in trouble.

So Sue Ann is knocked out for the time being. Therefore,  the only other options to save Chris are Rachel and her mother… interesting. Let’s see how things play out. I really thought Chris would go micro again in this chapter kkkkkkkkkk

I fell you are updating faster and I thank you for your hard work. I am Dying to see how you will wrap up this story.

Please, keep up the awesome work! See you next time :)

 



Author's Response: I picture Shannon as the girl that you’d love to be with: attractive, well-built, a little chunky—and would probably fall for, if she weren’t such a bitch! She knows what she wants and is willing to use her body to get it. Basically, someone you’d love to hate.

Suanne is incapacitated, but you’re right: they’re still Rachel, Janet Carson, and also Noreen, so there’s still hope.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2019 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 54

These Shannon chapters are getting better. At the beginning of this story, I hated her, but she actually makes herself quite an interesting villain. Of course, if she was hot, it would cause me to have difficulty choosing whether to root for Shannon or the good guys which is everyone else.

I like how Shannon is basically using her body to have her way with all the men she meets in this chapter. Whether it’s sex or flashing some guy, she gets more perks to help her move out of the country.

This new super absorbent pouch panty seems interesting. I like how Ray is sewn inside the actual panties. He can’t even see anything. He is just a Maxi pad basically, ready to absorb and smell her juices.

One thing I don’t think is clever is Shannon’s plan to frame Sue Ann. It seems very silly. Putting Chris’s clothes in her room? She put a “trail” that leads to her house? What trail? Chris’s favorite snack crumbs? Lol. It wasn’t specified. Also, when she told the landlord woman that Sue Ann was stalking her, I facepalmed. Why would Sue Ann stalk Shannon if Sue Ann kidnapped Chris? Wouldn’t Sue Ann be avoiding Shannon instead?

The fact that Shannon disappeared and Chris is missing will connect both of them together since Chris’s parents left Shannon in charge. So the police would look into Chris’s house. Then they would probably ask neighbors and such so Rachel and Mrs. Carson would help frame Shannon. No one else knows about Chris besides them and Sue Ann.

Is Sue Ann dead, or just paralyzed? Does the effect wear off? Also, if Sue Ann can get back up, she will look for Chris inside the closet and find the clothes of Chris in there, and deal with it appropriately. So Shannon’s trap won’t work if Sue Ann could just remove it.

With the info given, Shannon’s “clever” plan doesn’t seem so clever at all... unless I’m missing something.

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: First, I want to address the elephant in the room: Shannon’s plan. You’re not missing anything; Shannon’s plan isn’t “clever” at all, and that’s the whole point. She’s not thinking clearly she’s making it up as she goes, basically fumbling through things. She’s so blinded by her ambition and her love for Chris that she can’t see the mistakes she’s making, and when you see how everything ends you’ll understand.

I really wanted to explore Shannon using her body to get her way in this chapter. It explores her manipulative nature. I wasn’t sure how much Giantess/tiny man interactions would be in this chapter, so I added the bed scene with Shannon and the salesman. I’d actually think it’d be funny for Shannon to have sex while a tiny man was trapped inside her. Plus, I’m a fan of a woman who likes to tease her man in bed.

Now, just to settle your mind, Sue Ann is just fine, only knocked out for a while. I did extensive research on which drug could get the job done without doing any kind of permanent damage, so relax. Sue Ann is crucial for the ending of the story, as are Rachel, Noreen, and Janet Carson.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 31 2019 6:40 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

COME ON! COME ON! Chris never gets a break, Racheal even after he's saved plays a bit rough with him, then he gets spurned by the older woman and then Shannon screws (or atleast tries to) him over.  Not that her plan would remotely work in real life as Rachel and her mother will likely point how Shannon had him there for a week and never called the cops, would not let them into the house and how she claimed he was sick.  How do those remotely point to Sue Ann kidnapping him?

I mean really give the kid a break, you spend DOZENs of chapters tormenting him give him three of 'lighter' torment, have Shannon and Ray get jusctice done.  Have Rachel and Chris have their happy ending, let the suffering END!  Thank you.



Author's Response: I know that it’s frustrating to see Shannon seemingly winning all the time, and I also understand your dubious belief in her plan; actually, that’s the point. Her plan is unbelievable: SHE thinks it’ll work because she’s blinded by her ambition and isn’t thinking clearly. She’s basically making it up as she goes.

I wanted to share Shannon’s day, but I honestly wasn’t expecting it to take up the whole chapter—I was only expecting it to take up maybe a couple of pages—Plus, I was hoping to end the chapter later on into the night, but by the time she and Chris began their confrontation, the chapter was already 7-pages long, and I personally don’t like to spend an entire chapter where you’re waiting to see the conflict start being resolved to be filled with a bunch of back story that barely moves the main plot along, so, sorry about that. But, I assure you, the story is coming up on its conclusion, and I plan on the next chapter having some real excitement!

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2019 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 53

A lot of things happened this chapter, but I'm glad we got more fun size interactions with Sue Ann. Based on your last review response, I think you're doing an excellent job with the role you want for her, where she isn't intentionally stimulating Chris or is even aware of it, but intentions still don't exactly matter in the end.

Personally, I would have enjoyed it if she let him do something a tad more risky, like sleeping near/on her feet. But from how Sue Ann is personality wise, it wouldn't have really felt in character. But I think doing a alternate chapter (or set of chapters) where Sue Ann allows Chris to live out his fantasies with her would be quite enjoyable to read. I'm not sure what your plan is yet for the next alternate chapter, bit I think a Sue Ann focus would be a great idea.

But I think you did a great job with the relationship between Rachel and Chris, and I could see her wanting him to shrink more frequently in their real life too.

And I'm probably still in the minority where I do not like Shannon, but I guess that means you wrote a good antagonist. So I hope Chris is just having a nightmare with the ending of the chapter.

If you have no interest in exploring any alternate stuff with Sue Ann and Chris, then I'd be willing to write and give it a shot. If you don't mind and don't already have plans for it.

Looking forward to the next chapter and what ever alternate stuff you have planned next!



Author's Response: I know people want an interaction between Sue Ann and Chris, but it’s very out of character for her. I did, however, want to flesh out a playful interaction between Rachel and Chris to demonstrate her playful, teasing nature towards Chris’s condition and also evolve their relationship. There’s only a few chapters left, so keep checking back.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2019 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 53

Glad you mentioned his actually height now. Makes the interactions with the giantesses much more imaginable.

A one-inch Chris is much easier to spot, and more fun to play with. I can’t wait for the the new games that these ladies could do with Chris.

I’m starting to see the roles of Rachel and Sue Ann now. Rachel is quickly getting comfortable with Chris being small. She went from super cautious to physical playing with him like how Shannon did. Except this time Chris enjoys it since it’s Rachel and not Shannon.

Sue Ann is playing the gentle motherly role while the “kids” are playing with each other. I like the bath scene where Sue Ann had to massage Chris. Of course Chris gets turned on while Sue Ann just saw it as a task to clean him. Haha. Maybe this will be a daily thing.

I’m a little disappointed on how Sue Ann responded to Chris being into her. I like how she mentions the age gap, but she didn’t have to mention the whole Rachel thing. Because then that sounds like Sue Ann isn’t interested in her. I always had the impression that Sue had one of those thoughts that Chris was a handsome young teen and while it would be weird when Chris is normal, being tiny kinda bends the rules a little bit. I was thinking maybe since Chris is tiny, Sue Ann could grant him his wish and do some sexy stuff with Chris. The foot rub was a smart way to start if off. I thought Chris could have kept doing that stuff before sharing his feelings.

The dream with 3inch Chris massaging Sue Ann and Rachel seemed real to me at first. I was thinking “wow, I guess we continue when Rachel came back from her house”. I thought it was real until both ladies took off their bras. That’s when I thought “ok, there’s no way that actually happened” and I was right. Chris just became horny as usual.

Then Chris wakes up to realize he is still 1 inch tall with Sue Ann. Even though he knows Sue Ann isn’t interested in her, that doesn’t mean that he can’t have any sexual interactions with her. Chris could easily climb out of his bed, travel to her bed, and meander down her body and play with her legs and work his way up. Soon, Sue Ann will get turned on and maybe give Chris the ride of a lifetime. I don’t think Chris would mind dying that way. It would be a sexy way to leave his world. It would be funny if he was stuck inside her and then he grew to 3 inches and Sue thinks some expanding/inflatable dildo is inside her. That would be a crazy example, but Chris has options to have some fun with Sue Ann.

The ending part with Shannon. I don’t think it’s real. We had a sexy wet dream earlier so it would make sense to balance that with a nightmare. Shannon showing up out of nowhere seems unlikely. I’m aware Shannon has that tracker to find where Chris is, but I don’t think it would have happened so soon. Lastly, we are just about to have some one on one time with Sue Ann. Shannon seems to always out babysit Chris.

Well, what a crazy chapter. I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: To start, check out my responses to the other reviews of this chapter; I actually touch on a lot of your points and explain the characters in detail. In a nutshell, Sue Ann takes on the role of the responsible caregiver. She’s not trying to sexually frustrate Chris with her actions, but she represents the type of woman who has that sweet personality, yet is slightly oblivious to the effects she has on others. Both Sue Ann and Rachel will play vital roles at the end of the story, but that’s all I’ll say for now.

The dream with Rachel and Sue Ann was really me catering to the erotic needs of the story while still keeping the main storyline moving. I just wanted to make sure I had enough “good stuff”.

I’ll admit, your suggestion about a sexy interaction between Sue Ann and Chris is....intriguing. I’ll certainly keep it in mind.

Crazy chapter?! It’s been a crazy story, and the ending has something you may not expect, so stay tuned.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2019 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 53

Very excited to see Shannon back! But how did she get past Sue Ann? Unless he's dreaming... can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: You’ll find out exactly what Shannon’s been up to in the next chapter. It’s also going to help set up the last alternate chapter.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2019 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 53

I sense a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter. And you did a great job showcasing how prompt Rachel is to swing moods in these last two chapters. First she is worried and sad for what happened to Chris, than she is playful and happy but also clueless about how dangerous she can be to him and also gets angry if someone calls her out. Question: what would have happened if an authority figure (Sue Ann) wasn't around? I think she would eventually get carried away and hurt Chris unnintentionaly. Can't wait to see more of this love story XDD

 

Speaking of Sue Ann, I must say I wasn't all that invested in her character, but you made it impossible not to like her. She is the only character so far to take care of Chris without asking or getting anything in exchange. She just want to help someone she trully cares about. It's just sweet. And the fact she does not display any sexual desire towards Chris is very good for his own development in the story, because he has to step up, take the lead and open up to her.

 

You have handled the story extremely well so far. And what a cliffhanger!! Now I am gonna update daily waiting for the next chapter! Hope you are happy!! XDD

 

But, seriously, It seems we have entered the final arc of Chris, Shannon, Rachel and Sue Ann tale. Thank you. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

 



Author's Response: I really wanted to explore Rachel’s character and how she reacts to Chris’s situation in these past two chapters, along with how her and Chris’s feelings for one another have evolved. Even though I wanted her feelings towards Chris to grow, I still wanted her character to act realistically, kind of how I view her overall character as a close best friend would: somewhat teasingly and playfully. But through it all, she cares about Chris and wouldn’t willfully hurt him, at least not on purpose anyway. I actually like the playful giantess interactions, and wanted Rachel to play the playful-yet-loving giantess, as opposed to Shannon’s playful dominance.

I knew I wanted Sue Ann to come into the story in the second act, and wanted her character to be the responsible caring adult. I was trying to endear her to the readers so that you all get a sense of why Chris likes her so much, and why he’s so broken-hearted when she clarifies her feelings, while leaving just a glimmer of hope: “Maybe in the future...”

It’s true that things are starting to wrap up, but there’s still lots of good parts and conflict resolution left, so check back at the end of the month.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2019 4:17 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

I could have sworn I read back door the first time I read it. Hmm. Maybe I saw Shannon saying door and my mind put the “back” part in there. I never heard someone say front door for that purpose. I thought people just say sex for the vagina and backdoor for ass. Hmm. Alright.

Ohhh! Now I know why I thought Chris has grown so big. I got the alternate chapter mixed up since he grew a lot in that chapter with Mrs Carson. (I read it multiple times. Not my fault it’s so good. Lol)

Author's Response: I double checked: it definitely says “front door”. It may not really be a saying; I was just trying to convey Shannon being coy.

I’m really glad you liked my take on your idea for the alternate chapter with Mrs. Carson; it was quite the undertaking getting it just right. In the future, however, I will make sure to reiterate how big Chris gets as the potion wears off to avoid any confusion (especially in the next chapter).

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2019 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 52

Whoops, forgot to give a review after reading it the other day.

I agree, this was a long chapter. You won’t hear me say this often, but I found the Shannon bit to be the most interesting part of this chapter. Loved the way she kept Ray in her ass the whole time.

Even the dialogue this chapter was spot on. I couldn’t help but get excited about Shannon foreseeing the future and imagining taking care of Ray while he takes care of her needs. The way she worded it made it more amazing.

If she going to let the salesman fuck her in the ass with Ray inside her butt? That’s fucked up but hot at the same time. She is the only giantess in this story to actually have a scene like this.

Then the bulk of this chapter was dedicated to Sue and Rachel, but mostly Rachel. She tried to remain calm, but kept worrying about every little detail. I thought she was going to faint multiple times this chapter, I mean relax girl. What happened in the past is in the past. I don’t know how Sue Ann and Chris dealt with her. She almost reached the annoying category when she reacted to Chris started sharing his memories with her.

Then at the end we have some Rachel foot play which I know someone was looking forward to this. I had to smile because I knew it was going to happen soon once Rachel was aware of Chris.

However, at the very end Chris is growing again. Now I think he might be growing too fast, haha! Remember when I would complain that you were keeping Chris too small for too long? (It was a long time, to be honest.) Well, now I keep forgetting how big he is and I think I lost track. Is he 1 foot tall now? Or is he the popular 6 inch dildo size?

Also, will Chris have more adventures with Mrs. Carson, or Noreen again? If not, that’s ok, there is at least Sue Ann so hopefully they can have some fun together.

Anyway, glad to see another chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Yes, I was actually wondering if you were going to write a review or not.

I had actually debated whether or not to include the Shannon update in this chapter, or wait until later. I figured since readers were curious as to what she’s been up to the whole time, it was best to check back in with her. I wanted something sexy to happen as I was wondering if the rest of the chapter would have anything juicy, so I figured Ray stuck in her ass would suffice.
Now, if you recall, Shannon told the salesman “only through the front door”, it was meant as an innuendo for “NO butt sex”; Of course, she WAS still planning on leaving Ray stuck in her ass while she screwed the sales guy, so...

I knew the bulk of this chapter would be dialogue driven, exploring Rachel finding out about Chris, coming to terms with his situation, and developing their relationship, I just didn’t realize how long it was going to be. I really needed the transitions and emotions to feel natural and not forced. Remember, Rachel’s not only been worried about Chris, but she finds out that he’s actually been shrunk, something up until now she thought impossible, so it’d definitely be a shock! You must also remember that “he hadn’t told her about the pool incident”— I apparently left out that he hadn’t told Rachel everything—so he’s left out some important details in his story. And although Rachel develops real feelings for him, I wanted her to interact with Chris and show her playful, teasing side.

As far as Chris’s current size, he’s still only 1/2 an inch tall, until he grows at the end of the chapter. How big will he be now? You’ll just have to wait and see.

As far as Mrs. Carson and Noreen...well, once again, you’ll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 52

Are you planning on doing any more alternate chapters before the end of the main story, or at this point do you want to finish the main story before you do alternates? Also is the giantess Shannon storyline in the main story or an alternate? Still looking forward to seeing what she's up to...and I can't wait to see the look on Chris' face when he sees her again.!



Author's Response: So, I’m planning one more alternate chapter before the story ends, but I’m still trying to set it up. Unfortunately, I can’t really talk about the Giantess Shannon storyline without spoiling the rest of the story. Everything will come in due time, however, so all I can ask is to please be patient.

Now, if you refer to the beginning of the latest chapter, you’ll recall that Shannon is out and about making preparations to leave the country (with a tiny scientist stuck in her ass). She’s still got a lot to do, though.... and she’s still actively trying to find Chris.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2019 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 52

I just saw this is categorized as a completed story. It's a mistake isn't it?? Or are you working on a part 2??



Author's Response: I just saw it. Yes, that was a mistake. I’ve fixed it. Thank you.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2019 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 52

Chris and Rachel fun time fells lighthearted and natural as it should be. Overall, a great interaction chapter. Both are starting to admit there feelings and Rachel seems honnestly elated to find out Chris likes her feet. I can only pray that someday I will write scenes as good as you do.

I would say the only sad thing is that Chris is growing again, but it's obvious things aren't going to be that simple for him, especially now that Rachel and Sue Ann are finally taking a more central role in the story.

Thank you for the chapter! Can't wait to see how Chris and Rachel will end up when the story reaches the climax XDD

 



Author's Response: I knew that I wanted Chris and Rachel’s relationship to blossom in this chapter, and for everyone to see her innocence, but I also wanted to add a little playful interaction between Rachel and Chris, just to emphasize that the ENTIRE dynamic between them hasn’t completely changed: Rachel’s happy-go-lucky, tomboyish nature still comes through, which means that she’d still tease him about the whole ordeal.

It’s true that Chris is growing again, but it won’t be much. There’s still a lot I want to happen before...Oops, can’t spoil the ending. Let’s just say I’m not done with him yet.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2019 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 51

I read some comments and realized I forgot an important piece of information: Shannon wants Chris to be tiny forever. I was foccusing on the growth possibility, but this is also very interesting now that Rachel is aware of Chris situation.

As I said, Rachel will never do something to hurt Chris BUT she might enjoy having him tiny. That way he can always be with her. As we can see a love triangle or square taking form, Shannon might take advantage of Rachel desire and innocence to get to Chris.

Just an addition I wanted to do to my last review after reading the most recent comments and responses. If Chris get stuck tiny forever, I hope he stays an inch or half an inch tall. This way the giantess stay very big but he isn't microscopic.

 

Again, thanks for the story and also for always replying to the comments.



Author's Response: Well, I think you’ll enjoy where the story heads from here, and you may be surprised by how it ends.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2019 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 51

Hmm. Sue Ann and Rachel are aware of the tiny Chris.

Personally, I think it’s too soon to let Rachel see Chris. Sue Ann just noticed Chris at the beginning of this chapter and it would’ve been nice that she gets some alone time with Chris while everyone doesn’t know his situation.

I agree with Chris, that she didn’t have to answer the phone while Chris was hanging onto her nipple. Maybe, she is just used to answering phone calls. She prioritized a phone call over helping Chris. Lol.

I love how you had Rachel react to Chris before and after meeting him. The way she was super eager to see Chris, unaware of his condition shows that she is ready to see him no matter what. I love how you had her show up at the door unannounced. Her character is the rebellious teen and she disobeys all the adults in this story.

Sue Ann could’ve also used a video to send it to Rachel so Rachel could calm down. Is FaceTime in this universe? Clearly Rachel got what she wanted by manipulating Sue Ann to let her see Chris.

If it was this easy for Sue Ann to slip up, imagine Rachel, whose mother can easily tell when she is upset or excited. You already know Mrs. Carson is going to see the look on Rachel’s face and see what’s up.

So, did Rachel just walk all the way to Sue Ann’s house? Did she ask her mom for permission? I’m also guessing Sue Ann’s Place isn’t that far since Rachel just showed up there and she is too young to drive. It’s interesting because earlier Sue Ann said she was too far to spy on Shannon and that’s why she asked Rachel to help. So, I think we need clarification on the location of Sue Ann’s house to Shannon’s.

After reading numerous chapters of unaware, it almost seems off to have not just one, but 2 giantesses be aware of Chris. Something is abound to happen. Maybe Rachel gets overprotective and Sue Ann finds it dangerous. Also, with 2 giantesses, means Chris is twice as likely to have some “accidents” going on with either of them. But either way, now you can try all the aware stuff that you have been waiting to write about.

Sue Ann could bake a cake. She puts Chris on top of it when it’s finished and Chris starts eating. Then Rachel walks in the kitchen and takes a piece of cake with Chris on it. Sue Ann turns toward Rachel to say hi, and noticed Chris is missing from the cake and connects the dots. Rachel is about to eat Chris when Sue Ann stops her. I could see some playful ideas show up.

It’s hard to imagine something sexual when both ladies are there. One has to be separated. I think Rachel has to leave so her mother doesn’t wonder why she is gone for so long. Then Sue Ann could have her fun. After all Chris wants to be alone with Sue Ann. While, he likes Rachel, I’m sure he wants to be with the woman who he fell in love with.

Well, this chapter is very different from the rest since we are moving from unaware to aware. I like aware so this is a great change of pace. Very unexpected though so I appreciate the surprise. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

(Also, congrats on 150 reviews!)

Author's Response: To begin, I’d been debating for a long time whether I not wanted Rachel to know about Chris. I ultimately decided for her to find out because I wanted their relationship to grow an evolve. I also wanted her reactions to seeing him small to seem realistic, and for her quirks to come out moving forward.
If you recall, Rachel walked to a park earlier in the story. Not long after, Sue Ann walked up. I mentioned that Sue lived nearby and would occasionally do work in the park to enjoy nice days, so it’s not inconceivable for Rachel to be able to walk to Sue Ann’s place, as they both know each other.
To be honest, I kind of thought up the whole “phone incident” on the fly. I needed to have some kind of sexy interaction between the two of them in this chapter; I felt it fit well.
Now, moving forward, keep in mind that Chris has feelings for both girls, and each one cares about him in different ways. There might be some playful aspects, but he’s still a teenager, so is Rachel, and although hormones might be raging, they’r still young and innocent. Don’t worry, though, Chris will have his moments with both girls.
I really hope you like where the story is heading; I’m also pleased that you posted review 150!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2019 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 51

Thank you for the quick update. I love gentle giantess and this last chapter was perfect in all ways possible, not only highlighting Sue Ann relation with Chris, but also Chris reserves in revealing himself to Rachel. Let me elaborate.

Until now Chris had been desperate to get help doesn't matter from whom. But now that he got Sue Ann, he was reluctant to reveal himself to Rachel and even stated he prefered to be found by Sue Ann. I can think of a couple of reasons for that. Up until now we have yet to see direct interaction between the giantess and Chris, aside from Shannon, now we will be able to see Chris dynamic with other characters.

It's preety obvious that Rachel loves Chris deeply, and Chris also has feelings for her, that being the first reason he didn't wanted to be seeing by her (he is embarassed). BUT, although I don't think she would ever do anything to hurt him on porpuse, Chris knows how mischievous Rachel really is, he knows her true self and knows she will want to have fun with him once he is found out.

 I would emphasize the mischievous part. He is the most important person for her besides her family, and now she can have him in the palm of her hand (or the sole of her foot kkkkkkk), maybe that will get to her head and Chris knows it. Maybe she will even get jealous of Chris preference for Sue Ann.

Then there is Sue Ann, who I was surprised to say "the feeling’s mutual" and even blush. As I said, Chris built quite the giantess harem for him kkkkkkk. There are many ways the story can go now. The way I see it, we will have some character development as Sue Ann and Rachel are now alone with a inch tall Chris. 

Another idea (fell free to use it): Sue Ann has to leave Chris and Rachel alone for whatever reason. Rachel takes this chance to have some fun with Chris, that doesn't like much as he still traumatized from the recent events, but what can he do against her? He eventually cries and shouts he prefers Sue Ann to take care of him triggering Rachel jealousy.

At this moment, knowing Sue Ann was out and thinking no one is home, Shannon breaks into the place with many formulas in hand (as she knows the effects must be wearing off). She is startled by Rachel and ends up spilling all the mixed formulas at Rachel and Chris, creating a growth formula by accident. Chris is back to normal, but his jealous friend is now more than a 100 meters tall and growing... and she is out to play with Chris and squish Shannon and Sue Ann. 

 As I said, just another idea. I know it's nearly impossible for things to happen as I described, but I hope it helps in the creative process. Can't wait for the next chapter! As always, thank you for all the effort and care put into writing this story. You are amazing!

 



Author's Response: First off, thank you for being such an avid reader. I always enjoy reading and responding to all my reviews.
Chris, indeed, is apprehensive and embarrassed about Rachel seeing him in his current state. He cares and has feelings for her, but he knows her teasing and playful nature all too well. We’ll just have to wait and see how she reacts. I CAN say that there will certainly be some character development with Sue Ann AND Rachel in the next chapter, but that’s all I’ll say for now.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2019 4:28 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what Shannon is up to and still looking forward to the giantess chapters! Hopefully Rachel and Sue Ann can have a little fun with Chris before Shannon returns too!



Author's Response: If you recall, Shannon hatched a plan to keep Chris shrunk....permanently, and has captured and shrunk the scientist who invented the formula; you’ll soon see what else she’s been up to.
As far as the Giantess Shannon scenario, I’ve been brainstorming and have a few ideas. You’ll just have to wait and see.
As for Sue Ann and Rachel, you must keep in mind that they care for Chris and wouldn’t do anything to intentionally hurt him. However, despite how careful they are, “accidents” are bound to happen. Plus, they might find an opportunity to be a little “playful” with regards to his situation.
Remember, Chris has feelings for BOTH Sue Ann AND Rachel. He’s always been sweet on Sue Ann, and he’s just now coming to terms over his true feelings for Rachel too. And seeing them both as giants might awake other feelings as well, so stay tuned.

Reviewer: lord_ne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 51

Yeeeeeessssss I’ve been waiting like a year and a half for Sue Ann to find Chris

Author's Response: Yes, a lot of readers have been waiting for this. I knew Sue Ann was always going to find him, but I couldn’t decide how it would actually come to fruition. I ultimately decided on having Chris end up in her house to leave the door open for some gentle encounters, so I certainly hope you enjoy the next chapters with Sue Ann.

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 50

I've been enjoying the past few chapters of Chris being away from Shannon, but this one has definitely been my favorite so far. All of the unaware stuff with Sue Ann has just been awesome, and I'm looking forward to what happens now that she found Chris.

Side question, but have you ever considered creating a text adventure with based on this story? You have a solid cast of characters.

Either way, take care and good luck!



Author's Response: Right now, Sue Ann has just found tiny Chris. As far as the dynamic between them, Sue Ann is basically a sweetheart and would never do anything to hurt him, especially in his current state. Expect to see some gentle giantess interactions.

I haven’t considered any text adventures with these characters, but I do have, and am enjoying— the alternate chapters. If you haven’t read the latest on with Mrs. Carson, go check it out. You’ll find it just after Chapter 49; I hope you like it! Thanks for reading, and for the review.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 50

Perhaps another idea for Shannon growth chapters could include Chris growing back to normal size with the Rachel, Sue Ann and Mrs. Carson who discuss with Chris's parents who have returned what happened and plan to confront Shannon when they hear a pounding. Suddenly a shadow falls over the house. They look out the window and Chris immediately recognizes Shannon's giant feet. You can fill in the fun at the house (hopefully with footplay) but somehow they escape to the city. Shannon grows even bigger and goes to find then downtown for more fun!

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