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Reviewer: imagin8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2021 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 60: Bridgeton

Wonderful, wonderful stuff. Charles suffering a bit of a relapse, and Maxine putting her own disappointment and frustration to one side to make him feel safe and cared-for is lovely, heart-warming stuff that shows her development as a character and as a young woman. Her innocence about the everyday racism her fellow travellers face is well-observed too, as well as her ability to listen to and respect their explanations.

This has arguably been Maxine's least proactive chapter of the entire story, but instead it is her ability to support and supplement the group that has impressed enormously, as well as keeping a handle on her anger and both encouraging and protecting Charles, who clearly appreciates this enormously.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

8.5.7

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and glad that you're still enjoying the story. Always appreciate your reviews.

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