[Report This]Date: September 14 2018 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 13: Do Not Disturb
I'm late. I was so lazy and postponing my review that there is an entire new chapter.
And in response to you previous review, I must say that I completely trust you!
That little girl owns that entire city basically, and they couldn't even beat her without the help of Maxine. How lazy is that town? It almost looks like some kind of joke. They continuously don't take Maxine seriously because she's a girl and at the same time cannot even handle that little girl, let a lone an angry Maxine.
I wonder why she doesn't exploit this conservative medievel-like world more. She could easily get more free Ale if she just enters a drinking competition and beats everyone by drinking more than the rest combined. That would be something!
Also, I really think she could use that strength potion, then she can run a bit faster with her heavy armour.
Also, thanks for writing, and hopefully see you next wednesday!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the vote of confidence.
Well she could be quite secretive and maybe these were just lower end thugs that she was using rather than genuine threats.
There probably aren't too many such competitions but if she found any she would enter them. Especially pie eating contests, a stronger Maxine is a very scary Maxine.