Date: February 10 2021 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 60: Bridgeton
Wonderful, wonderful stuff. Charles suffering a bit of a relapse, and Maxine putting her own disappointment and frustration to one side to make him feel safe and cared-for is lovely, heart-warming stuff that shows her development as a character and as a young woman. Her innocence about the everyday racism her fellow travellers face is well-observed too, as well as her ability to listen to and respect their explanations.
This has arguably been Maxine's least proactive chapter of the entire story, but instead it is her ability to support and supplement the group that has impressed enormously, as well as keeping a handle on her anger and both encouraging and protecting Charles, who clearly appreciates this enormously.
Can't wait for the next chapter...
Thanks for the review and glad that you're still enjoying the story. Always appreciate your reviews.
Date: October 14 2020 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pilot
I finally got caught up with this story, and I'm so glad I did. This story is simply fantastic! It took a little getting used to at the start considering that I had expected it to pick up with our previous protagonists. However, I'm so glad I stuck around because I've grown to really like the cast. I love the world building and character progression, and I can't wait to see more. Like her family, I'm really rooting for Maxine to already get romantically together with Charles, they're just so good for each other. Keep up the stellar writing!
Thanks for sticking with the story and I'm glad that you're still enjoying it.
Date: April 23 2020 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 41: Staying For The Night
I'll try and get round to writing a reply of more substance another time, but all I can say is this was a wonderful chapter, and probably my favourite chapter of anything you've written.6.9.1
Thanks for that, I'm glad that you haven't gotten bored of this series yet.
Date: January 02 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 34: One Day At A Time
How nice of Maxine to give him a choice. If I was Maxine, I would postpone that choice a bit more to make sure he wouldn't possibly be alone in a difficult moment like this. And knowing the "middle ages," living near Maxine probably still is one of the safest places on Earth.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Thanks, I appreicate that. Yeah, if you want to stay safe, Maxine is your best bet.
Date: October 09 2019 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 33: One Shall Stand
Wow, that was a severe chapter. I can feel the fragile state of mind through the words.
Thank you for writing. I hope next chapter is a bit more cheerful :(
Yeah, it was difficult to write but was something that was necessary. Thanks for reading
Well it might be a short while before there is another chapter. One thing that's for sure... Charles isn't going to recover from this arc quickly.
Date: September 11 2019 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 30: Off Her Head
I like drunk Maxine! She's way more forward and fun than sober Maxine.
I also really like the direction this has taken, it's a bit of a cliffhanger and Charles will have to rely on his wits to ensure he and Maxine don't get caught up in something terrible.
Bravo! I'm really looking forward to the next instalment.
Thanks, and hopefully you should enjoy what comes next.
Date: February 14 2019 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pilot
Will we see the girls' size limits? I'm mostly interested in the elongated one because I cant see her reaching it my herself. At some point balance becomes an issue so she would need support from one of her sisters.
I'd love to see Maxine with her maxed sized family.
That might be seen at some point. Not sure when.
Date: February 14 2019 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pilot
Another great chapter! Can't wait to see more maxine/carrie interaction. The only bad part is that we have to wait a week for an update.
Thanks, hopefully you'll enjoy what comes next.
Date: February 06 2019 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pilot
I know that the girls can't stay grown during dinner time and stuff like that, but why doesn't Carrie make herself taller than her sister.
I think that it would be another way of annoying Maxine with Carrie being a half foot if not a full foot taller all the time.
That is true, but they are already at their limit inside of the house. Even Maxine's head is only an inch or two away from the ceiling.
Date: January 30 2019 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pilot
I believe that was her family. Sorry if I get some names wrong because it has been a while since I read the original. But yes, the princess that Gwen said would never stop growing. I'd like to see how that turned out and what problems that could have caused.
Would also enjoy to see how that one Queen if fairing or her family. Could she have taken the growth option right before giving birth to give her children a permanent size advantage over everyone else? What is her family like?
Also would love to see more Gwen. I'd picture it being more along the lines of a fallen goddess finding a mortal and falling in love and gaining a new found respect for humanity. Actually be a little grateful to the Martels for teaching her that lesson.
Also because Gwen's adventures were the best.
Lastly enjoyed the aspect of strength difference between the sisters. Would love to see Maxine pushed to the limit.
Thanks and all that might pop up in the future
Date: January 30 2019 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pilot
Loving the story so far. Extremely enjoyed the interaction between Maxine and her giant sister Carrie.
Are we going to see the mistress of size again, and will she ever regain her godhood?
Also what about the princess Nicole?
Hope to see more interaction between the sisters in the future.
Thanks, we'll see more of the pair in the next chapter
One day we'll see Gwen again, whether she regains her godhood is another matter. Would be bad news for the Martels if that happened.
When you say Princess Nicole do you mean the daughter of Lord Tyrone?
There will be more interaction during this arc, not sure after that though.
Date: January 23 2019 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23: Triumph and Embarassment
Damn, I wonder how big carrie can grow, over a hundred feet while still squatting and not even at max size. Incredible, I hope we see more of her in the story, and poor Maxine, that was a dick move
Yeah, Carrie was pretty big here. She might pop up again after this arc but she still has a lot of issues with Maxine