Date: January 15 2018 2:43 PM Title: A Breathtaking View
Wow... this was an amazing chapter. I love how you went into a lot of detail especially with the princess. I really can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully there would be more interactions with the princess. Also what was she going to say to Goethe!
Keep up the great work, definitely a fan of this story now.
Author's Response:
Thanks! You know, I wonder what she was going to say exactly. :)
[Report This]Date: January 14 2018 3:01 PM Title: A Breathtaking View
Hey, I just read the first two chapters and wanted to say that i liked it so far. The story has solid characters and a good premise. The two mains are super cute together, and I think what we’ve seen of their relationship works.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It may not be the smoothest of relationships, but I hope that it is one of the stronger ones out there.
[Report This]Date: January 14 2018 9:08 AM Title: A Breathtaking View
This would seem to be a fun story, so far. I look forward to its development. I hope that somewhere in the near future, you will provide more information about the history of the two races. Or are they two?
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hopefully, as the story unfolds, I can explain the world around them in an organic way.
Date: January 13 2018 7:10 PM Title: A Breathtaking View
Helen sounds really attractive and, might I add, sexy in her nightgown. I like Goethe AND Rena takes playful jabs at her showing how close they are to her despite her royal status. I also like the subtle dominance Helen displays over Goethe. Can't wait to see more of this.