[Report This]Date: August 25 2020 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
So I've been meaning to write a review for this for a loooong time. This story really stuck with me when you first published it, and I think it's been an inspiration for me on more than one occasion in my own writing since. You really captured several of my favorite aspects of what I find to be the best kind of vore scenario. It's off the cuff, experimental, the "giantess" is really into it, gentle, willing, and dangerously erotic. I love that you devote almost an entire chapter just to describing the act of Edward being swallowed. It's some really superb imagery that I found just as stimulating this time reading through it as I remembered from over two years ago.
I think that I withheld my review before because I was waiting for you to finish it, eagerly looking forward to whatever experiments she had in mind for Edward next, but if you're not planning to go any further on this one, I don't want to keep quiet about how much I loved this story forever. I was reminded to revisit it once I saw that DeviantKibate was illustrating it, and I tell ya, as soon as I made the connection that it was, indeed, "that story" that I was now experiencing in comic form, I got so excited. Congrats on that, btw.
Anyway, everything about this story appealed to me. The characters, the setup, the dialog, Rachel's secret, dark urges, Edwards practically skeptical yet enthusiastically curious attitude, and the fact that it's realistic in that Rachael didn't just suddenly turn into a murderous monster just because she was experiencing her fantasy in the best way imaginable. It's a great story. I look forward to anything else you write, be it a continuation of one of your existing tales, or something new. Your brand of brain-magic is very much my cup of tea.
thanks for being a writer!
Author's Response:
Thank you for such nice and detailed feedback!
I've left it open for more to be written, but I've been on an extended break from writing. I've just started to get back into it though. I have some existing work that desperately needs finishing, but I always intrended to return to this story eventually. I actually had a whole little adventure planned out for the two of them.
I'm really excited seeing my story come to life in a well drawn comic, it's awesome! Incidentally the "How to steal a clone" is also mine, a tiny short story I wrote specifically for the writing contest.
Hit me up on Discord if you like, Durandle#0216 - always happy to discuss story ideas and bounce things and see what sticks, haha though it may be a bit spoilery;)