[Report This]Date: December 13 2018 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Mate! What a good story!! Absolutely loved it. They way you describe the scene and portray the character’s feelings is magical. I can’t believe it took me so long to come across this masterpiece hahah
It’s not just this one, your other stories are also very very good. It’s a pity that people don’t bother commenting and letting you know how good you are...
Anyway, I hope you still around to write more stuff. Looking forward to the day you do!
Thanks for the hard work :)
Author's Response: Sorry it took me a while to respond. I’m always really happy when someone gives good feedback, it’s creativity fuel for writers :D
One day I’ll continue this story, perhaps soon as I’m wrapping up other projects currently.
[Report This]Date: June 05 2018 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent work! I really like stories where the pred is believably tempted into letting digestion run its course. Great internal scenes too, maybe next time Edward will end up in that gut.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Haha who knows, it could eventually happen! I just need to find the time to write more...
[Report This]Date: January 09 2018 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
The relationship here reminds me of the one in First Date. Dangerous yet caring. The descriptions exceed the level of detail found in most vore stories. Looking forward to another chapter of this or First Date!
Author's Response:
Thanks for editing your review. It always makes me happy to know people enjoy what I write, it's part of the motivation to write more.