Date: January 14 2018 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?
Amazing! I’m slightly confused at the timing though, is this right after the court session in the epilogue?
A day or 2 after, yes :)
Picks up right where NvHS left off
Date: January 02 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?
Hmm. I had my doubts of this story when I read the summary. Only reason I probably did click here was becuase you advertised it on "their little secret".
This story is good, not as good as "their little secret", but the story is interesting and original. I like that.
Diana's objective job isn't still quite clear to me. Does she punish criminals because she wants to for fun or becuase she has to eat people and she just chooses criminals becuase they deserve it?
She is looking for criminals. This other guy located them, but he happened to find Kristin based off a tweet? Was that tweet even legit? How did he verify it? It must have been a clear pic or soemthing.
Now Kristin is famous. What about other criminals that people haven't of? How does Diana's friend locate them. I'm sure there are some people who should be able to hide. Not everyone is connected to the internet where it's a giveaway to your location.
One thing that annoys me is Diana's logic about her victims and criminals. She seems to assume lots of stuff and doesn't verify information and judges mostly off news outlets. She doesn't investigate claims about certain charges or crimes. Better to assume they are innocent and prove they are guilty.
In this world of technology, especially the one where Diana lives where you can locate people easily, it's easier to frame people and create fake evidence and get away with crimes. Imagine the whole system against you, the judge, jury, police have been paid off just so they can put you in jail. Sure, Kristen seems to be on the side that gets the advantages, but we are not entirely sure. Only that Tucker guy on tv gave any hint that Kristin should've been in jail.
Notice how Diana is learning new stuff as she talked with Kristen. She goes after people without knowing the whole story. Kinda makes me despise her for just doing, not thinking. She should be thinking before acting.
Part of me wishes soemthing bad to happen to Diana. Probably shrinking innocent people screwed by the system. Then they post stuff on media so people such as Diana believe it and then she goes after them. I need to be convinced that what Diana is doing is justice and not just a stubborn mistake on her part for not investigating each case.
Also, I know of 2 girls with the name Kristin so for the name to for a guy will take some time to get used to.
Not bad of a story. I still prefer "their little secret", but this one is good too.
I can't wait for the next chapter! (of "their little secret".) Hehe.
Date: January 01 2018 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?
So I had a major brain fart and thought Jane's name was Diana, my mistake. Anyways, this is a cool intro. Diana sounds like a potential giantess version of the guy from Death Note, whose name I can't remember at the moment.
Light is his name! Love that anime! And you're right, their kinda one in the same (only we'll find out how far Diana goes with it...)
Date: January 01 2018 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?
I'm impressed you write so quickly. This new story has got me wondering if Kristin will be in any future stories. Also, did Diana find a cure sometime between this story and Their Little Secret? She uses a piece of tech to shrink people, and she hasn't been seen eating any tinies in your other story.
I'm confused. Let's try and clear this up. Diana is a new character and has not taken place in any of my other stories. I think you have Diana confused with another character, Jane maybe? Also, their little secret is 7 years after the ending of Nick VS High, so there is no correlation. Also, Diana doesn't use shrink tech, she has an actual ability (call it a superpower if you'd like). From the first chapter, it's quickly revealed that Auron is responsible somehow for Diana's power.
Let me know what character you're confusing her with, I'm sorta curious now... Is it Jane? Hmm..
(Also hey Milo! :D )
Date: January 01 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - It's Ok To Kill Criminals... Right?
Uh oh, I've been called out! I appreciate the message though.
This is an intriguing concept - a vigilante who shrinks and consumes criminals. If she has to do so every week, I wonder how long she can maintain her moral high ground. And is Kristin finally getting his comeuppance?
Yay! Glad to see you again :D I've missed you on "Their Little Secret"... I promise I've learned my lesson this time around, no spoilers I promise! As for Kristin.... God only knows what fate lies between him and Diana!