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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Samantha

Timeout. The end notes said that you will be finished with this story by Monday? What! I thought this story was just the start of a great adventure! That's only about 3 more chapters. I would be really disappointed if this somehow wraps up that quickly. This is the one story that has attracted me to this site for this last week.

Ok, back to this chapter.

I loved the touching moment between Adam and Kaya. They both lost their loved ones and for a moment, I wanted them to fuck. I wanted them to both go at it with a purpose becuase of how terrible things have gone that day for them. Sure, they are both hoping to reunite with their lovers, but I couldn't help but see the chemistry work out between the two. I like this new pairing.

The other pairing takes the latter of this chapter. Ashley and Richard decide to talk. Not just any talk, but this talk is the one that will descide how this sex toy relationship is about to go down. Basically, Ashley reveals that Samantha was the tiny beforehand and that she tried to fight and got killed. Ashely warns that she doesn't want the same fate for Richard, so she wants him to accept his position as a sex slave.

Honestly, if I was talking to Ashley and she told me that. I would say, "my dreams have come true." Of course, I would only say that in my head becuase if Ashley knows, then she wouldn't tell Jane to be gentle.

Richard has a point. Ashley wasnt able to handle a breakup and live with Jane so she stayed with Adam just so she could have a place to stay and food to eat. Now that she is committed to Jane, she was able to burst in rage to Adam and move on. Just this complication led to Richard getting tangled becuase he was best friends with Adam and Ashley was still with Adam at the moment. If Ashley was single, then this would be a whole different story.

The shouting match was awesome! I loved the banter between those two. They each share how they feel and both understand each other. It doesn't change the fate of Richard, but now the situation is more clear and Ashley is trying to help Richard not die.

Some good plot and it explains the motives of each character.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You misunderstood my end notes.

Yes... this story is almost done already... but you don't realize that I've already written 24 chapters :)

I'm super far ahead, and am simply uploading the chapters that I've proof read right now.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Samantha

Poor Samantha but great story.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it :)

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