[Report This]Date: May 15 2018 10:00 PM Title: Preparations and Plans
Really enjoyed this. I especially like "unhappy" endings like these for the protagonists. There is a lot more fun to be had here if you want to keep writing, I was surprised where it ended. I expected Tiffany to be Jugg's daughter and to see some more debasement of Yuri and Mary.
Thanks for the story, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm happy you liked it! I could definitely write more, and plan to at a later date (still have some other things to finish first lol). I was thinking of making Jugg's Tiffany's mother, but then realized that it wouldn't make sense for Mary and Yuri to have met her before hand so I didn't go with it.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2017 2:00 PM Title: Preparations and Plans
I must say thank you for posting the chapters in such rapid succession, I didn’t have to wait too long to read the next segment. The only bummer is that it’s over, though I’m sure Mary will be well used by Jupiter for quite some time. ...One can hope for a “behind the scenes” short of her next film set, perhaps? *wishes upon a star*
Once again, another amazing story of yours, thank you!
Author's Response:
Your welcome! I had actually planned this to just be a one shot story that would have mostly been the shoot and what happened after it, but it grew more and more so before I knew it I had the entire thing done lol
I have nothing more planned for Mary, Yuriko, Tiffany or Ms. Juggs at the moment, but that could easily change. :D
Thank you for reading, I'm happy you enjoyed your time!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2017 8:40 PM Title: Preparations and Plans
Having grown up in Hollywood, I have always enjoyed stories on here set in the show business realm, and this one is no exception. Love your style, and the play on words with the title.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear that I'm not misrepresenting the show business realm too much :)
I love clever word play, so I try to use it as much as possible when appropriate.