Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Invention

Ha! That was awesome! Very inventive love-making by Mark. Maybe Zava needs to up her own game now. I guess she's lucky in that it's mostly pretty easy to get a guy going.

Oh, learned a new word here: ciurass. I thought it might be something nasty, but it wasn't.

People may think it odd that I review this story, since my name is on it. I hope everybody knows that paisalandia is writing this part solo.

Excellent stuff, as usual.

Author's Response:

Thank you RainMan. If it was not  for the way you fleshed out Zava in your other story, this one may have never been written and I'd remain a lurker in GC. Just so you know, you seem to have some kind of ESP as per your other review...