[Report This]Date: April 23 2018 4:04 AM Title: Intersecting tribulations
What an amzing and detailed turn this has been. Justine finally makes a decision and it only took Sarah dying for her to do it. That's really sad.......but I can't say Justine didn't deserve it. Quite fitting that her punishment would be losing the people she cares about like the families of the peole she's eaten. Hopefully she'll be better as her size and self appointed station as queen demands. Although that's a pretty shitty town to be queen of. My advice: Find the smartest folks you can (I know. Nearly impossible in that backwater dumpster full of inbred morons and sexual predators) then rebuild the infrastructure. Use slave labor if you have to. Start with with a decent home for you and yours then I don't know schools and shit I guess. What does this town even do? Farming?
Anyway now that my contractually obligated Justine criticism is over. Why is is Westly still alive! Seriously! Fuck him! Fuck that town! You could make an argument for Christine sure, she's just an emu bellied, sack sucking, coward. But Westly?! Bah! I'm mad about that! I guess he's faith that he used as an excuse to commit countless atrocities while creating a self serving viel of divine hypocrisy was rewarded! Amen! Fuck off!
I applaud Justine's mercy. For a heel turn she was surprisingly justified and composed. I think she came out on top for once. She only killed like two people. Good luck Justine.
Also just great to see this story back! Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response:
I don't think the town could build a shelter large enough to house Justine even if she enslaved them all to build it. Though just picturing them trying to build even a basic 50 foot high by 50 foot wide by 200 foot long shelter for her to roll under is quite fascinating.
As for Wesley I did change his fate upon realizing how hard it would be for Justine feel justification in killing him. It was really close however and if Christina didn't manage to pipe up he would have toured the rest of Justine's digestive tract for sure. For the next few days I would say people in town should watch their attitudes around Justine as she surely holds plenty of resentment toward them after Sarah's tragic death.
Also thank you for your appreciation of the story and hope you enjoy the next chapter posted.