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Reviewer: 101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

crushed by his best friend. ouch...

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

Nice story, and nice how you involved the reader into the scenarios. I especially like how three of my favorite shrinking scenarios are involved: 1) trapped in a girl's shoe as she wears them; 2) avoiding being stepped on; and 3) FINALLY being crushed underfoot like a bug. And especially that the girl who snuffed "me" out wore flip-flops, my favorite kind of footwear for girls, and my "killing shoe" of choice, if you will.

Another favorite from me. :)

Reviewer: want2besmall Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 20 2007 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

very  good

Reviewer: Pixelpaws Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 04 2007 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh. Short, but you make good use of every word you've written. I very much look forward to seeing this continued; it's not often you see foot-play in this much delicious detail.

Reviewer: someguy1900 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2007 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic!  Please continue!  More feets ;)

Author's Response: cheers, will do, im just trying to remember everything i had in my head when i first thought of this one

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