Date: August 14 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice story, and nice how you involved the reader into the scenarios. I especially like how three of my favorite shrinking scenarios are involved: 1) trapped in a girl's shoe as she wears them; 2) avoiding being stepped on; and 3) FINALLY being crushed underfoot like a bug. And especially that the girl who snuffed "me" out wore flip-flops, my favorite kind of footwear for girls, and my "killing shoe" of choice, if you will.
Another favorite from me. :)