Date: November 28 2017 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Maggie's Turn (Part 1)
Loved Mrs. Stevens punishing her daughter. She should not be disobeyed. Everyone must obey her rules, everyone. You really get the idea of what it feels like to be small before her.
Excellent,
Diesel
Author's Response:
It's never a good idea to disrespect Judy
[Report This]Date: November 26 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 4: Maggie's Turn (Part 1)
Loving this new chapter. Love that we see a story where Maggie is putting is punished.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 4: Maggie's Turn (Part 1)
Torturing Mags!
You are lucky somebody paid for this or I'd have to lodge a formal complaint.
Author's Response:
Just in the nick of time
Date: November 26 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Maggie's Turn (Part 1)
These what if's are actually pretty revealing....at least that is if the characterization is canon even if the events aren't. Like the two women of the house bonding over Scott's suffering. That's something I believe is probably true. Of course who knows right? This is a what if. It makes me wonder if Judy would actually shrink Maggie under the same circumstance. I don't believe for a second she'd ever actually eat Scott but this one feels a Mythbusters plausible. Anyway good story. I actually feel bad for Maggie which is weird. Well I feel bad for all those kids, Judy's insane.
Author's Response:
The characterization canon is a bit loosey goosey in this story, but it's probably fair to say this is a decent portrait of Maggie circa the fifth and sixth stories of the canon series.