[Report This]Date: June 09 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Had meant for that last comment to be on chapter one. And this one is more directed at the second chapter.
Have always believed that the simple act of picking up a tiny is a veritable fountain of symbolism. As seen from Pod's perspective, it can be one of the scariest things immaginable. Knowing that you were to be completely at the mercy of a giant. So it goes without saying that it's an incredible show of trust to willingly place ones self into the hands of another. Really made me happy to see the way you wove things together. :)
Ohhh and the part where Pod was watching the TV was darling! :) It's easy to forget how daunting something like an elephant would be for a tiny. For them it would be like a living mountain. :)
Date: October 04 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'd sleep on her too. Any thoughts on her putting him in a fish bowl or a small aquarium?
How about he's on the kitchen floor and a spider comes along and he runs screaming. Natasha is wearing her black higheeled dress pumps from work and she walks over with a gigantic booming sound and slowly steps on the spider.
Nice chapter,
Diesel
Date: October 04 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
A very cute story so far, I've been enjoying this one a lot! The pace is great, it's giving so much time for their relationship to flesh out, rather than diving right in at the expense of character. Though I do of course look forward to any indulgent bits that might come. :)
As a quick note, I believe you might have had something else on your mind as you were writing the kissing scene. That, or autocorrect has betrayed you. ("labia" when I suspect you meant "lips", haha.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments!
Also, labia can refer to both sets of lips, oral and vaginal. Usually used for just the latter, but I can spice it up, can't I?