Reviews For Super in power, small in size
Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 5 so close, yet so far away.
Author's Response:
Date: October 05 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 5 so close, yet so far away.
Oh its on now! Good job.
If you can stand just one more formatting comment, the story flows better when there is a new paragraph for each person speaking.
I love the story though. Kylie I think will just have fun with him, I think Emily will really want to dish out punishment, maybe worse.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the kind words. Thank you. I'm gonna try to implement that format and see how it works. I did notice it in other stories a little bit. I have a couple more chapters already written but after that I'm going to try it.