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Reviewer: Houseman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2018 7:23 AM Title: The Other Shoe Drops

This last one was kinda boring and a tease, can't wait for the next one. Could it have more butt stuff, since I read the first one I've been on excited for. Vore her up her butt! :D

Author's Response:

The stories that have character development get all the reads. I'm trying my hand at it.

Reviewer: Longman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2018 1:54 PM Title: The Other Shoe Drops

Ohh your good, more please
this one good the whole idea awesome but this one alittle short on excitement. cant wait
Please have some ass place, only fair that she get shoved up holly butt for what she did.
That and maybe trip threw her body be hot most please bum for sure

Author's Response:

There's anal in here somewhere. I can't find it but I do remember writing it.

My handwriting is hard to read.

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