Date: January 20 2018 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Hey! Not sure how I had missed this story so far, but it is a great piece of giantess in the city, with a good backstory! I certainly hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words - glad you're enjoying it!
Date: October 28 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Fantastic story! I would be very happy to see more of it!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: October 28 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Fantastic story! I would be very happy to see more of it!
[Report This]Date: October 22 2017 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
This story is so much fun! I can't wait to see where this goes. There is, after all, a whole case of formula floating around out there...
Author's Response:
Sure is ;)
[Report This]Date: October 14 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
You don't see too many good old-fashioned rampage stories floating around anymore. Loving this one :)
Author's Response:
The classics are classics for a reason I always say - glad you're enjoying the story! :)
Date: October 13 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
I like how you show how the random civilians perceive her, their fears and all. Having said that, I hope you don't overdo it or it might dilute the plot too much. I really want to see how Tasha deals with the 3 men in her life. Raymond is included in the list.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback ;)
Date: October 09 2017 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Fantastic <3
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: October 03 2017 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
I cannot wait to see how Tasha interacts with her ex and Steve! Love this story!
Author's Response:
Your wait will soon be over! :) Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: October 02 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
xcellent. The caliber of story that keeps me coming back after months of finding only poorly written, exclusively smutty or listless stories. You have quite the aptitude for character development and imagery. I am there in your story, observing the action and invested in the emotions of your characters. Exceptional, a rose among thorns.
I'm hoping that you can muster the strength to finish this story with the brilliance you started with. Please don't let this story spiral into a crash as most of the good ones on this site seem to.
The direction you are going with Tasha is exciting, I love her transformation from a beautiful, innocent victim into a terrifying, maniacal goddess. The relationship between her and Steve is also well developed (and I'm secretely hoping for a tragic, twisted, evil and sacrificial end to that romance, but this is your tale).
My only suggestion (and it is only a suggestion, nothing more), is that you take a little more time to develop the fear of the victims. I feel every other emotion the characters experience, and if you just spent a little more time developing their fear, this story would be perfect.
But again, I'm not writing this to criticize. I am writing this to inspire you to continue. Thank you for what you have given us so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you - I appreciate the feedback! I've got quite a bit more already written, which will be posted once I find time to edit. And still working on finishing it up, but glad you're enjoying it so far! :)
Date: September 29 2017 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
LikeD especially the ending, and hope for more..... SOON ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! More is one the way :)
Date: September 27 2017 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Must...have...mooooore! XD
Author's Response:
Coming soon, glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: HEC-T 182
Loving it so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)