[Report This]Date: October 01 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow, this story is awesome, and I'm eager to read its coming chapters!
Just a quick editorial fix (I am prone to typos as well), I found two things to fix in chapter 3, 14th paragraph:
"Just as casually as the activity was begin,..." was begin -> had begun.
"...Heather slid her ample feet out of her personal masseuse’s grasp,..." masseuse -> masseur.
Author's Response:
Good catch
Date: October 01 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yep, but next chapter will be the end of tall drink, and if we average we get (goodnews + badnews)/2 = I have no strong feelings one way or the other ;)
Author's Response:
A kind of harmony there
[Report This]Date: October 01 2017 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
This build up is great. Can’t wait to see what Heather has in store. I find myself wishing I could have had a neighbor like Heather growing up haha.
Author's Response:
Who wouldn't want her down the block?
[Report This]Date: October 01 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
A-ha! So, that's how she's going to get him alone with her. Smooth!
Author's Response:
Where there's a will there's a way