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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2017 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

London is alright, but since they met, I don't see the awe if they first met. I was expecting them to measure up and stuff and take their time realizing how small/big the other person is.

Stefani was a surprise for me. I like her. She is kinda flirty and I think she would enjoy having a tiny guy as her pet. Would love to see more of Stefani soon. Maybe this is where Kristi got her sexiness from.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: This chapter was mostly about the young devilish girls but some more enticing stuff will happen between London and James later on. Stefani is definitely a flirt, unintentionally. As for Stefani, we certainly have not seen the last of her. You can expect some mother/daughter fun soon if you know what i mean.

Author's Response: This chapter was mostly about the young devilish girls but some more enticing stuff will happen between London and James later on. Stefani is definitely a flirt, unintentionally. As for Stefani, we certainly have not seen the last of her. You can expect some mother/daughter fun soon if you know what i mean.

Reviewer: SinisterDeviant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

This is my favorite chapter for sure. Kristi wasn't very active, though. Maybe she doesn't want her friends to know how she feels about James?

You can see how Mandy is torn. Shes not sure wether she wants to be a decent person or succumb to her natural desire to dominate. She seems to look up to Christine, maybe she will end up being just like her.

Reviewer: Lorraine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

This one gave me shivers... I have to agree, definitely the best one so far.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 6: Fun in the Sun

To paraphrase an old nursery rhyme:

"James knows London.
London saw France.
James got squished
By Christine's underpants."

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