Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm trying to imagine Ms Hoshoku's reaction if she found out about Mariah&Ben in the elevator... mostly because it's less tantalizing than waiting for the marketing campaign :)

If (IF) I remember I'll try to comment a bit less here - I do love the story, but I'm disturbingly close to writing 50% of its comments, and it feels disturbing.

Author's Response:

We may yet get to see how Hoshoku reacts to others "using" Ben.

Ha! I mean, I appreciate getting feedback no matter the number of sources. This one seems to attract fewer opinions than some of the other custom stories I've been posting recently.