Date: September 20 2020 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was horrible
Date: November 24 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
I don't think reading about murdering a defenseless boy bye a sick mother and family makes a good story IM glad I am don't like that I might be a lot of things but I am not that
Author's Response:
Well, the subject isn't for everyone
Date: August 31 2017 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
As odd as a son-brother versus mom-sister story is to me, this was written in a rather intriguing fashion. One was always wondering what would happen next, and next, and next. Ignoring the family relation aspect, well my personal hang-up with that, it was quite entertaining.
Author's Response:
I can understand how this may not be everyone's jam due to the family connections. Glad you liked it despite
[Report This]Date: August 30 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, I certainly couldn't pass this one up. I think I know where Paul's Wonderland is. It's that sweet spot between lust and embarrassment, and your crafted prose put me right there beside him. Seriously, you brought me out of the abstract appreciation of the scenario, and into his conflicted mind as he steps out from beneath that couch. Nice allusions to the source material, too.
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks much. Glad you felt engaged
[Report This]Date: August 29 2017 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Really liked what you did with the last chapter in particular. Neat little story, very out of the box theme.
Author's Response:
I aim to please
[Report This]Date: August 29 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is a fantastic addition to the queensville universe. Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
Thanks; glad you liked it