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Reviewer: SomeRandomMinion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2022 1:59 PM Title: All Present and Accounted For

Hold up--Lygia actually considered eating him? O_o

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2017 3:35 AM Title: All Present and Accounted For

A short ending. But nice. Maybe a female officer shows up and looks at how pathetic they are before she takes them. Only not to the police station but to her house.
I really enjoyed your story and your writing. It was exciting and well done.
Later,
Diesel

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