[Report This]Date: March 16 2022 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
"[...]she was the only one who stood between Lizzy and total domination over the entire planet. Nothing could oppose her" - Well that ain't true. Granted, Christi doesn't know that. One would think a City-spanning Battle wouldn't go unnoticed but if Siren wants to be unnoticed she probably instantly is the most forgettable person ever.
I didn't expect Siren to show up and stop the "Battle". But maybe it wasn't all that interesting to watch after Emily had been utterly bested like that. "Infinity Girl" surprised me though. Wasn't she decidedly NOT the Power-hungry Type?
I wonder whether Christi would raise to supreme deity status if the other three ended up destroying each other or would the Amulet end up giving its power to another girl yet again? (It seems like the amulet cannot be used by men for some reason. Why that might be... :P )It is still very enjoyable how you write these superpower fights. Even if a flurry of punches and kicks with literally earth-splitting force behind them isn't all that creative. Granted, it probably gets the job done more often than not.
Author's Response:
Christi was not aware of the existence of Siren at that
moment. So yeah, it was logical for Christi to assume that both Emily and Lizzy
were the most powerful beings on the planet at that moment.
And power corrupts anyone, even someone like Emily. So it was not hard for her
to come up with a name like that.
Yup, no male can drain power from the amulet. You know why?... I have
absolutely no idea.
I never bothered to write more specifically about the properties of the amulet.
To be honest, I was already done with this story when I finished chapter 8.
But for some reason this story stayed quite popular on my patreon page. People
kept asking for more chapters. So more chapters I wrote, even though my heart
was not in it anymore.
But the end is nearing. Only a few more chapters before the final chapter.
Thx for your extensive review and for liking this story, and thx for the
compliment about the fights 😉