[Report This]Date: September 16 2019 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 56. Max Explores Amy
I have been reading every chapter so far and I kept sticking around so maybe there might be something that I can look forward to. And that’s Katie’s mom.
Been a while since Steph’s mom (was Dianne Steph’s mom?) got some action, but maybe it’s time for a new mom to have some fun.
Before that, let me address these last several chapters. I like the inception idea of having Max inside Katie while she is inside Amy. It’s creative. Also, the other chapter where Amy was skinny dipping and was forced to hide Katie while that guy was closing in on her. I didn’t care much for Amy’s mom, she got annoying fast so I’m glad Amy got control soon. It’s also interesting to see how Katie calls Max her boyfriend and she seems like the horniest person in this story. Makes me wonder where she gets it from..... :)
I fell in love with Dianne since she gave off this vibe that she had some much control of her own house and she was the queen of her family. Especially when you mentioned that she was smart as her youngest daughter Laura and hot like Steph. A sexy combo that allowed Dianne to keep Max as her toy.
Not sure if my vote would count, but I think I would be happy if Katie’s mom was similar to Dianne or maybe she is super aroused all the time like her daughter, Katie. Her personality being a naughty mother who likes to have her fun. I wouldn’t mind another Dianne type character.
As far as looks go, I think you did a great job with Dianne, so maybe another Dianne type body with maybe brown hair instead of blonde? I remember you said Dianne was 38 yrs old with short blonde hair with a firm ass and double DD boobs. Even mentioned that she goes jogging and yoga which is a plus.
Also, Katie has brown hair anyway so why not have her mother have brown hair too. But other than hair color, I’m not sure what else to change compare to Dianne. She is fit, looks likes she is 20, slender waist, with wide hips, basically a milf.
Well, I’m sure the poll would have some choices which I won’t be able to see, but maybe my suggestion is closer to one of them than the other.
Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've been staying with the story!
Things are looking good in the polls for Katie's mom, I don't think she'll be as dominant as Dianne but she'll be very playful and horny.
Thanks for reading and I appreciate the comments!