[Report This]Date: April 15 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 35. Steph and the Gummy
I can’t beleive I am saying this, but this threesome was better than the one with Dianne. I don’t know, maybe it was because it was a surprise. I like that.
I’m surprised Max was able to have so much control this time. When he was in Dianne’s ass, she clamped down on him, trapping him there for a while which was sexy. However, here Steph has no idea of Max slipping into her ass and then climbing out? It’s funny, but amazing. Then Max simply played with Steph’s pussy while Katie was already inside? Max got everything he wanted and I think I envied him a bit which is probably another reason why I enjoyed it.
I like how Katie and Max were glad that they were not in each other’s positions, and finally at the end, they end up together in the same spot.
That last scene where Katie’s vision is blurry from the juices so she reached over and grabbed his dick was hot. I can imagine Max just watching Katie as his heart was racing as her hand slowly approached his member, throbbing and almost as if it was pointing toward her hand. Katie’s hand was heading right toward him and Max knew exactly what he was doing. He wanted Katie to “accidentally” grab his dick. It’s that feeling when you are in a line, waiting for something and this pretty girl in front of you bends over to pick up something and her butt just bumps into your crotch and she acts like nothing happened. Like, you set yourself in the path of the girl and she makes the contact. That’s what I saw, and I loved it!
The description of Steph’s ass from the inside as a “warm apple pie” was perfect. You really made it convincing that Max actually did this and is telling us his story. I can picture my hands in pie. Sounds gross, but I get the idea.
In response to your last review: Yes, I love Dianne, but no need to add her in anytime soon. If you did, that would be awesome, but I’m well aware that Dianne has taken up about half of this story so far. I started rereading your story, and I realized how far Dianne got to play with Max compared to the rest of the ladies. I doubt you meant to make Dianne the main giantess, so I’m ok with other girls having time with Max and Katie. The story is still excellent and super sexy, especially this chapter. Steph probably is my second favorite giantess anyway, so I’m still enjoying this. You can bet I will continue to read this story, it wasnt just Dianne that got me into this, but what happened to Max that got me excited. Dianne was the cherry on top that made it all sweeter. The core is still Max getting sexy action and I see no shortage of that. Your writing has improved so much that I don’t need Dianne to get me amped up for your updates.
I can’t wait the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked the chapter! This next one I wrote very descriptive. Hope you like it too!
Thanks for reading!