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Reviewer: flashbat78 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2019 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 34. Used and Abused

this is good



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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2019 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 34. Used and Abused

I feel like I got many questions for this chapter.

So Katie actually enjoyed being swallowed and spat out? My only explanation is that Katie actually likes Steph, so she didn’t mind the whole trip.

Why was Steph naked below the waist? Surely she doesn’t just walk around her house while her sisters are around, does she? I mean, I’m not complaining, since it made this scene much better, but it didn’t seem reasonable.

When Laura was “frantically knocking” on Steph’s door, wouldn’t it be loud enough for others to hear? Maybe Dianne is still in the shower, but that’s quite a long shower. Otherwise, Steph could put on some headphones and ignore her sister.

One thing I like about Laura is how she placed Max and Katie in areas where her family will interact with them. We saw her place Katie and Max in Steph’s food, and now she put Max below Steph’s ass. In adddition, Katie is stuck in that gummy jar, but the best one for me was when Laura dropped Max down Laura’s pants before her run. One of my favorite moments in this entire story.

Interesting, Max likes Steph, and it seems he likes her much more than Dianne. I remember him enjoying being with Dianne at first, and now hated it. However, Max seems content by working his way into Steph’s asshole. Max must really love Steph then.

Love the use of gummy bears. They are about an inch tall so I can easily picture their size compared to these ladies. Maybe Dianne gets to play with a gummy bear while she searches for Max.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Katie is actually experincing a little amount of pleasure from being used as a tiny. A massive tongue I'm sure could pleasure a girl just as much as a guy. You will read more of that this new chaoter.

Steph wasn't planning on seeing her sister again and to make the story easier I just made her the type of person that loves to sleep naked and free.

I know you want Dianne back but for the majority of the readers I am keeping her away for now. There are many ways I could bring her back but I am purposely going to be avoiding them for now. Sorry, but also if you ever do decide to pledge, there are more side chapters that you can read all about Dianne. Plus add in your opinion in polls to direct the story. 

I am glad that there are still parts you are enjoying in the story and I hope there are more to come. 

Max, honestly loves any girl he can sexually be with. Steph is just known in school as the hottest so he takes an extra liking towards her.

Thanks for reading :)

 

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