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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2019 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 33. Spit Don't Swallow

Wow! The title name was relevant! Steph swallowed Max’s cum! I wonder if Steph even noticed. So far, only Max knew it was there. How lucky he must be to see his mark on Katie’s butt and then get swallowed by Steph. Amazing!

I forgot how twisted Laura is. Also, how old is she again? 12? Doesn’t she have the internet to see sex? Or did Dianne not get Laura a phone yet? Or she could watch her mom have fun with... oh wait, that already happened, and Laura isn’t satisfied. Haha!

I can’t believe Katie was relieved that she isn’t with Dianne anymore. That means that the teacher that had Katie probably was a pretty nice giantess. If Katie thought Dianne was cruel, she is nothing compared to Laura. At least what Diane did was sexy. Laura is basically a child and is more likely to kill them. Dianne knows how to keep a tiny safe and since she lost a tiny previously, I doubt she will be that careless again.

That previous tiny is Dallas, right? I can only imagine what he went though with Dianne before he was gone. Maybe he was a sex toy too. Or maybe Dianne used to be cruel and that for him killed. Who knows.

As for the poll about Katie, first I just want to thank you for posting the poll announcement here so I can see what you are sort of planning for this stoey’s future. Even though I can’t vote, it’s nice to see what people are deciding on.

I know you probably won’t read this until after it concludes, but I kinda don’t know what to do with her. I know my vote doesn’t count anyway, but her is my prediction: Katie is kept by Laura since Katie is more rebellious than Max which makes Laura like her more. Laura gets bored of Max and Dianne is asking for her tinies back, so Max gets retuned to her. That way Dianne gets her favorite sex toy back and everyone is satisfied.

I don’t mind if she dies or not, but I would like her to be out of the picture for a while. I think Max is getting distracted by this tiny sexy girl. Then Katie could show up in the story once in a while. That’s my pick/prediction. Hopefully the other viewers have a similar perspective.

Lastly, there is one loose end going on here. Dianne went to take a shower and is probably done soon. I wonder what her reaction will be when she finds her tinies missing.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! So far the votes have been towards keeping Katie and Max together. Steph is going to have some fun with them and then ill add more polls to determine what happens next.

I still read all the comments and consider your ideas into the story too, but my patreons will be getting the majority of the decisions made. I want to write this story for the majority of my readers. I hope you continue reading and enjoying it as much as you have been.

Thanks for reading! 

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