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Reviewer: teradonk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2019 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 30. Tiny Three-Way

great chapter! love how Dianne makes tiny max bust a nut against the inside of her giant asshole. that rarely happens in gts ass scenarios, a tiny tiny male, trapped within a giantess huge bubble butt asshole, caked in shit and forced to blow his load by the giantess!



Author's Response:

Im glad you liked it so much! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 30. Tiny Three-Way

First off, there are 2 chapter 29s and you can’t click “next” when going from chapter 28 to 30.

Second, Max was thinking for about half the chapter. Max’s thoughts revolved around escaping and starting a new family with Katie. Lol. I found this funny. But I think I’m more interested in Dianne’s thoughts in this situation. Perhaps, her plans for both tinies and what she could try in the future. Or she can think of risky ways to punish them but not actually do them. I just love how you portray Dianne, but I want more of her thoughts instead of Max’s.

Besides that, I kind of enjoyed this chapter.

The descriptions about Katie and Max’s positions was fantastic. I like the Morse code idea, but if I was Max, I would just enjoy the experience rather than try to communicate with Katie. Now that Dianne is sleeping, it might be cool to use Morse. But during the action? He could be enjoying it.

I also love how long Dianne wants to keep her tinies inside her. Most stories seem to have their giantess’s stay inside for only moments, but Dianne is creating this system to keep them with her at all time which I approve of greatly. I would hope in the next chapter or 2, she keeps them all day as well.

I think I’m more interested in the next chapter: Pantie ride. You said I might enjoy this chapter and judging by the title, it does bring me excitement.

We got a little taste of it during the “All mine” chapter where Dianne placed Max in a little pocket in her panties. The pocket is nice, but I keep picturing a blanket wrapped tightly around him. However, the concept of Dianne keeping Max in the inside front of her panties is completely sexy. I could see Dianne trying Max in a spread eagle position as if he is tied up on a bed, but instead it’s panties that hugs her pussy all day.

You also did a similar scene when Dianne went to yoga class but she placed Max facing away from her crotch. Sure, he could see the world, but personally, I think Dianne is the type of woman who wants to force Max to see the scary world of her pussy ready to swallow him up.

I think you know that I love Max to be facing her pussy rather than her ass, so I’m curious if I will get my wish this time. If I knew it was a pantie ride chapter one week ago, I would happy to share many examples of what I would like to see. Then again, I know this is your story so I don’t want to take over a scene or anything. But I do like to influence some sexy scenes though.

This panty experience will feature both Katie and Max. The main character is Max so the title of the chapter may refer to just him, so there is a possibility that Katie will ride on Dianne’s bra. The other option is both Katie and Max are in Dianne’s panties. Actually, there could be a third option where Katie is inserted inside of Dianne while Max is on her panties watching. Ok, there’s actually a few more possibilities, but what seems confirmed is Max riding on Dianne’s panties. Katie could be anywhere but Max is defiantly on her underwear next chapter.

Then there is the question of which side of her panties and how would he be positioned. My wish is Max is inside the front of her panties, forced to hug the pussy lips trying to kiss him and suck him inside. Bonus points if he is tied to the panties and while Dianne’s pussy is trying to pull him in, her panties hold him back and it’s a tug of war on Max all day. His head, midsection, and dick go in and out of her pussy.

I could just imagine Dianne pressing a finger or two onto her panties, forcing Max into her pussy. I could also see Dianne going to the bathroom and opening her panties to check on Max, and saying something sexy like “I’m going to keep you like this all week” and then release the waistband to seal him back up against her.

As for Katie, I don’t really mind where she goes as long as Max gets stuck to Dianne’s pussy. Katie can ride on the back of Dianne’s panties, be inside Dianne’s ass, trapped in a bra cup, or be in her shoe.

I’m so excited for next chapter! I hope I don’t hype myself up too much, otherwise, I might leave a sad review. I’m sure it will be fine. I just have to have patience. Your content is just too sexy!

Author's Response:

I fixed the chapter issue, thanks for letting me know.

Unfortunately Max isn't enjoying Dianne's lucrative deceptions that much so its turning him off from enjoying the positions she is putting him in. His hormones do take over in situations but afterwards he goes back to being uncomfortable.

After the pantie ride chapter, the story will be going back to its roots when there was a lot of unaware content. I've gotten requests from pledgers asking for it and I try to please everyone. Don't get your hopes too high tho because I don't write exactly how you think. Some stuff you will like and some stuff you would have done different. But either way, I hope you enjoy reading my work no matter what happens with Max. 

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