[Report This]Date: February 04 2019 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 23: New Mindset
Oh shit... Well that's not good... O_O lol
Date: January 19 2019 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 23: New Mindset
Great chapter. Hope Max gets unbirthed and becomes Dianne's baby(especoally if he becomes a baby girl, male to female unbirth is my favorite), or at least remains trapped inside for a long time. Especially if Dianne has sec with a male with Max inside. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! Unfortunately that doesn't happen in this story; however, I will write a side chapter with Dianne having sex as Max is trapped in her womb. I'll also do a male to female unbirth and post it to my Patreon, make sure to stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: January 19 2019 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 23: New Mindset
Whew! Another exciting chapter!
I love how Dianne told him to crawl down her body!
Also, great descriptions of her body position as Max was crawling between her and the bed. I can imagine her smooth stomach press him into the bed and also her hips basically humping him until he was inside her. Sexy!
The womb....hmm. That’s something that I did not expect. Well, knowing Dianne is a kinky woman, she probably shoved many things up there besides Max.
Wait a minute! What if the previous kid that Dianne kidnapped is stuck in her womb?! What if there is a skeleton inside? That would be a total mind blown for me! After all, it is dark, so I’m guessing Max still has a chance for that happening.
This chapter reminds me of that dream chapter where Dianne gave birth to Max and Max’s sister was there too. This time, Max will literally be born again as Dianne gets him out of her.
Just the thought of being stuck inside a gorgeous woman’s womb sounds hot. I can only wonder how long Dianne will keep him there. Does Dianne even know he is all the way up there? What is her reaction? I wonder if she feels him.
At the end, Max was hoping this was a dream. I’m glad it isn’t. But also, why would he wish this was a dream? He was just stating how much of an honour it was to please Dianne. Just because he is trapped, he wishes it was a dream? For me, this is erotic! I’m glad it’s not a dream. Being stuck inside a sexy woman likes this is amazing, and he went up her vagina too, the best of the 3 openings, haha.
I really enjoy it when Dianne talks to Max and teases him. I hope she tells him that she is going to keep him forever or something like that. Her verbal control as well as her body control is fantastic!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the comment!