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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2017 8:16 PM Title: 20: Sharing Soap

I wonder how Dianne realized that Max was missing. She seemed pretty satisfied with that piece of thread. Maybe it slipped out and she checked on herself.

I love how Dianne didn't want anyone to help her find Max. The earring part was funny. Clever how she played that off. In addition, by wanting no one to help her shows how determined Dianne wants Max to herself and that's the perfect thinking that I want Dianne to have. Just her and Max. Bliss.

Max getting a good laugh at Dianne. He kinda needed to have some humor once in a while. Then again, I bet he is happy that she is desperate to have him back. Shows that she has not forgetting him. Imagine thinking that a string satisfied Dianne better than you. That would make me a little mad. Max must feel good knowing that Dianne was missing out on his presence.

Great descriptions of Max trying to escape Zoey. Her tight walls making it difficult and kept him inside as long as possible.

As soon as Zoey mentioned the soap, I knew it was a classic shower scene. One thing that surprised me was how many women got to use the soap, and it's not even over for Max! There could be more women/girls next chapter! Interesting that he was embedded into the soap so they wouldn't even feel him. I wonder if they ever saw him though.

Who washes their genitals first with soap? I thought the face is first. Maybe Zoey is still learning. I bet Max was thinking "maybe I can alert Zoey at her face", but then Zoey goes straight for her pussy. Lol.

Lucky Max, got intimate with Dianne and now his sexy teacher. This guy gets so much action and I am jealous. Probably going to be used by all the ladies as soap and Dianne will use it last and find Max on it. Imagine, Dianne using the soap and when she is done, she finally realizes that Max was on the soap the whole time. Dianne might also give Max a questionable look, imagining what just went through. Well, that's how I would imagine it.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2017 5:23 PM Title: 20: Sharing Soap

Awesome chapter!

Creative use of the soap.

Wished there was more time with the teacher.

Shy girl could be interesting.

Maybe Dianne will use the soap after they are all done.


I can't wait for the next chapter!

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