[Report This]Date: October 08 2017 3:45 AM Title: 19: Unaware Traveler
Zoey seems just like all the other girls in the beginning of the story. They are all alright. Nothing spectacular like Dianne the goddess.
Zoeys age wasn't a big deal for me, but it did feel weird for Max to end up in her pussy and she doesn't even realize it lol. I thought she would be super sensitive since her hole is tight and is young so her brain responds to sensations better.
In addition, Max unloading in Zoey. Does that count toward sex, a tiny and a giantess? Well, I'm sure it counts for Max, but does it count for Zoey since Max was barely even there to her? Also, it feels kinda awkward that Max kinda got turned on by Zoey. Sure, she may be pretty, but I think if that was me, my mind would be messed up if I realized I was in a 12 yr old pussy. If this happened with Dianne, I would melt and evaporate to heaven. Such an erotic chapter, but I'm not sure if it was a good choice to have this girl get the sex scene.
Then again, I didn't pick her, so maybe the other readers may enjoy this scene. It was ok for me, I'm still excited to get back to Dianne. If I was her pet.... it would be too good to be true.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I did find the chapter a little strange but I knew the other readers wanted something like this so I added it.
Zoey is new to feelings down there so she is sensitive but also unaware to what its supposed to feel like. I haven't said she feels Max down there but she does, she just thinks its a feeling you have after masturbating.
Also the age does bother Max but not as much as you are thinking, Max is only 4 years older, and just turned 16, so really only 3 years difference. He finds it weird and bad but not enough to turn his perverted mind away.
Hopefully the next chapter will be better! :)
[Report This]Date: October 07 2017 9:44 PM Title: 19: Unaware Traveler
Another well written chapter. Not a huge fan of the Zoey stuff because of her age tbh, but more people asked for it than didn't. I wouldn't mind Max meeting the older sister she mentioned though ;) Any way, can't wait for the next one
Author's Response:
Sorry you didn't like it, was hoping for a better review but thanks anyway for leaving a comment.
Date: October 07 2017 8:30 PM Title: 19: Unaware Traveler
yes she seem fun
Author's Response:
Glad you like her, and thank you for your comment!