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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2019 10:30 PM Title: 13: Stuck to a Hard Surface

HOT HOT HOT

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 4:02 PM Title: 13: Stuck to a Hard Surface

Love the mouth play that Dianne was performing, both on Max and Mike.

I like that one sentence where you described both Mike's dick and her sex toy Max right next to each other. Satisfying two men at once. Looks like they both will satisfy her next chapter.

Yes! Handcuffs! I love anything with bondage. Dianne should get 4 pairs of handcuffs. Each one tying Mike's limb to each bedpost. With just one pair, I guess she will tie both his wrists together an around the bed frame.

I think the most interesting part is that Dianne was ready for Mike to shoot his load into her pussy. Did she want Max to go very deep inside her? Is the cum going to act as glue and make Max stuck to one of Dianne's inner vaginal walls?

Dianne is trying soemthing new here. She whispered something right before intercourse and this makes me revert back to when Dianne mentioned her "other" shrunken friend. What other kinky ideas did Dianne have that might have gotten her other sex toy killed.

Speaking of sex toys, I love how you made Dianne consider Max as a slave sex toy. That's hot. Especially with a horny woman such as the milf Dianne.

I can picture her spinning those handcuffs on her finger and I just wish I was either Mike or especially Max.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I used to have a story outline of where the story was headed but I have been changing and adding different things so now it's mostly made up as I write and I try to base it off the readers preferences. Thanks for the support and feedback!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2017 1:04 PM Title: 13: Stuck to a Hard Surface

Great story so far, I wonder if when Mike cums, if Max is going to be shot into Dianne's womb, and if it will contain unbirth making Max their child

Author's Response:

Maybe in a dream! lol

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