Reviews For A Wish Come True
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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2023 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great short erotic story. Love Jennifer's interactions with her friend Adeline and her evolution to voress (with a gentle nudge from her friend) and Mark's unwillingness at the end after it was his idea to get shrunk and try out being swallowed.


Reviewer: flospring Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

very good story, the love the end!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the mouth play and the swallowing description.
Since there's an Adeline in the story, I'm guessing you weren't casting yourself in Jennifer's role.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2009 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

You've basically brought my fantasy to life in the last part. This echoes things I've written, but I won't publish now, so as not to infringe on your great effort. I would mention that the name Jenny has been of great significance to me since a dream I had at age 10.

Great stuff. Write more please.

Reviewer: oishi1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2009 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

this story is the one I reread the most. I like the slow build and the way the characters change as it develops. It has a real believability that I don't see too often.

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 11 2009 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

AWESOME! loved it, great story telling

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2006 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Again an excellent job and the continuation I was looking for.  This was a much different  way to continue a story.  I like it, very original in this venue.

Reviewer: Tinyman33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2006 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is still one of my favorite stories by Adeline. I must admit i immensely enjoy her writings.

Reviewer: yummy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2006 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic Story! 

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