Date: August 03 2017 3:22 PM Title: Cat, Mouse, and a Shiny New Penny
I can't stop thinking about the possibility the Penny is actually Lilly. Honestly I hope not cause I wish to see Abel and Penny work together in this investigation as the "ptoffesional and rookie" team clyshe.
All in all i can't wait to read more. We are getting so few for each chapter 😐
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 3:32 AM Title: Cat, Mouse, and a Shiny New Penny
I love the parts where Lily and Abel communicate. When she said she released Gil, I pictured Lily "releasing" Gil from her hand and he falls into her panties. But since she said that Gil isn't with her, that can't be the case.
Penny needs to grow on me before I like her. She seems a bit ordinary and I would like to see some flare in her that gets my attention.
I'm curious about the addition of another woman. I thought Lily was already a lot to handle. Now Abel has to deal with Penny too.
Wait....what if Lily is Penny?!!!! Intern by day, kidnapped by night. This would be a great plot twist.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 02 2017 6:22 PM Title: Cat, Mouse, and a Shiny New Penny
I love the conflict between Abel and Lilly. I mean that on various levels. Mostly it’s like they are characters in different stories. Lilly thinks she the anti-hero of some smutty vore story who sees others as nothing more than a way to serve her appetites. Abel is the get things done detective who cares about the victims and won’t let them just become numbers. Great contrast.
Penny I like. She seems like someone who will add something to the investigation. Fresh eyes at least.
Being a rookie she’ll have something to prove. They all do. She might fail to really solve the case on one swoop, but detection, like every science can benefit from a failure as much as a success.
I’m really rooting for our hero...now heroes.
Thanks Duggernaut. A dark and horrifying chapter and still so cool. Great work.
Pix