Date: July 07 2017 12:19 PM Title: Second Contact
"I don’t doubt you would be quite a handful." HA HA HA HA HA HA HA One of the best and funniest foreshadowing lines I ever heard. {Also an assumption on my part}.
Hmmm, sounds like Gil is currently passing through Lily's bowels. Hopefully Lily will be sending Abel a photo tomorrow of her poop; perhaps tied up the exact same way Gil was in that first photo. Will Abel make the connection? Again, just guessing on my part.
This story is addicting; yet such a tease, it needs longer chapters. A+++++
Author's Response:
I love using that kind of language during the foreplay aspects of the story. Pretty plausible guess on your part.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 9:30 PM Title: Second Contact
Just discovered this and I must say, I had to drop a review! ;`) I'm really enjoying the suspense that you've got going here, I too, was kinda waiting for 'Mo's Story' but hell, man. This is some excellent writing, Dugger. My imagination is going crazy trying to figure out what this 'Lily' suspect' is all about, ...assuming that "it" is, a 'she' - and, she is 'somehow' shrinking her victims down and, ...well, there's that 'imagination' stirring again!
I really like the longer chapters and the characters, too. It feels like you're really building up to something incredibly special with this one. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch for taking the time to share a review midnight, much appreciated. My intent is to return to Mo once I wrap Tom's Story up.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2017 5:02 PM Title: Second Contact
Yep. I hate her.
Sadist suck in general, but Lilly is going for the royal suckage prize.
I'm sure his old phone's data and all got transferred over, but what if he'd gotten a new number? Might be a worthwhile experiment. She can't resist showing off, so if he can proceed with suffient caution (ie paranoia) he might just set an electronic trap for her. And blast the sick bitch out of her stockings.
Having a lot of fun with the mystery. Thanks Duggernaut.
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Author's Response:
Lol, that didn't take too long for you to form an opinion :)