Reviews For The Dream Girl
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 7:51 PM Title: The Friend
Date: July 03 2017 7:51 PM Title: The Friend
Not bad! I tore through all five chapters in one sitting. I have to wonder, though, if Sydney will stay unaware of John when he (inevitably) gets in her clutches.
Also, shouldn't Gaby's reply have read "I know I did..."
Author's Response: Thanks for your 'binge' viewing of the story, I greatly appreciate it.
As for Sydney and her unnamed friends, I hadn't planned on having them come back or even interact with John but they might make a return in a later chapter, filling the 'evil' goddesses in the story. It's a maybe however, I do have plans for this story that don't have Sydney included so far.
And for the misspelling or misinterpreting phrase, that's my bad. I'll find it and fix it, ASAP.