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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 7:51 PM Title: The Friend

Not bad! I tore through all five chapters in one sitting. I have to wonder, though, if Sydney will stay unaware of John when he (inevitably) gets in her clutches.

Also, shouldn't Gaby's reply have read "I know I did..."

Author's Response: Thanks for your 'binge' viewing of the story, I greatly appreciate it. As for Sydney and her unnamed friends, I hadn't planned on having them come back or even interact with John but they might make a return in a later chapter, filling the 'evil' goddesses in the story. It's a maybe however, I do have plans for this story that don't have Sydney included so far. And for the misspelling or misinterpreting phrase, that's my bad. I'll find it and fix it, ASAP.

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