[Report This]Date: June 18 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
o_0 this was one of the BEST stories I read on this site so far, your, just wow!!! I loved this part the most:
“Do you think they’ll ever find out?”
“What would be left to find?” Linda spat back with a bit of venom.
“Maybe...maybe we’ll make it through her system alive?”
“I don’t want to think about getting shitted out by your sister, Sarah!”
“Would you rather die? Well, Linda?” Ethan joined in the argument, turning toward Linda.
“I don’t know, maybe? Between dying and spending the rest of my life remembering being trapped shit and flushed down a toilet? I don’t think I want to remember that forever, Ethan! I don’t want to be this bitch’s shit!”
“Stop calling my girlfriend a bitch!” Ethan growled, eyes narrowing on the woman in the passenger seat.
“She’s literally going to kill us and you’re defending her? How fucking whipped are you, dude?”
“None of this is her fault, Linda!” Sarah interjected, jumping to Ethan’s defense.
“She’s going to murder us, even if she doesn’t know! This cunt is committing negligent homicide!”
“I swear to god, if you say one more thing about my girlfriend, I’ll…”
“You’ll what, E? Kill me? I think the gigantic fucking woman whose breakfast we’re floating in is going to handle that part!”
I LOVE your style man!! This talk was so hot, of them haveing this conversation of going against each other, and have this talk of not wanting to became this bitchs shit. The part with floading as part of giant turd in the toilet was so hot. I hope youll continue this and it having a cruel ending, I dont like happy endings.
Love your style man!! This story rocks!